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Practice verse #10...Can a killa kick some luvy duvy shit?

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Practice verse #10...Can a killa kick some luvy duvy shit?

Postby DƎRDYPK » May 6th, '10, 03:46

I had to do it


For you I would take this pen & write a million love songs
but everytime i write i always think of what i'v done wrong
the other hoes I met have always left me in the end
but our love is so strong that I could doubt that it's pretend
every second that I lay with you I feel so free
your so wonderful the only girl that really know me
your the reason why I wake up. without you I'm heartless
I'd stay in bed for endless days surrounded by the darkness
I hope you never leave me your oh so special
you can take my high & bring it to another level
we can take this world over it's a matter of time
we can ride till the end when the world is mine
we can sip on fine whine, we can look at the stars
pretend these airplanes in the nightsky are ours
we can do what we like in the end just know I trust you
untill I die my heart is yours baby girl I love you
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Re: Practice verse #10...Can a killa kick some luvy duvy shit?

Postby gutawafang » May 6th, '10, 03:48

And the chorus goess.....

Can we pretend that airplanes in the night sky are like shooting stars?
I can really use a wish right now, wish right now, wish right now.
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Re: Practice verse #10...Can a killa kick some luvy duvy shit?

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » May 6th, '10, 03:49

Fine, but you use the word "girl" too much.
There are other words to describe the human female.
Do to others whatever you would like them to do to you. This is the essence of all that is taught in the law and the prophets.
-Matthew 7:12

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Re: Practice verse #10...Can a killa kick some luvy duvy shit?

Postby DƎRDYPK » May 6th, '10, 03:56

GoodGirlsGetGutted wrote:Fine, but you use the word "girl" too much.
There are other words to describe the human female.


I know what you mean....
I changed one of the girls
but thanks for reading bro :worship:

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