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Truth Or Dare

Postby Spyder » May 2nd, '10, 03:03

J Roc: Spyder whats going on with you lately… aint posting much,
Hid your online status, you alright?


Truth
I try to keep a level head and represent my lyrics as truth
I was missin the audio flow I know but I got spirit to move
An engineer in the booth, man against machine workin the gear
Ahead in text of where I thought I’d be for sure in a year,
I owe that to Cole, yea you’re probably chokin I know
But low and behold my repetition was growin so old
I aint kissin his ass, just given credit where credit is due
Notice how Im the only one with nuts for steppin to you,
All the tournaments I’ve held were more ‘fare’ than my job
But when I got the red name I acted like you was starin at God
It wasn’t fair to you all, cause I wasn’t the best in my Class
Lost some homie’s cause of that, like “I aint being friends with his ass”
Now I don’t care for all that still got an army at my back
In fact, were all together again cookin up a new track
Generals baby how I got where Im at, a fighter and winnin
Their the ones who make the ‘web’ worth it for Spyder to spin it.
My minds finally right, time to unwind for a minute
So come and try me if you think this new styles a gimmick.
Rhyme as a cynic, flow as a preacher, no moral control
Just a pissed off addict who ignores what he’s told.
See these pills and sleep troubles are real, I beg they be over
Always caught in my own shit, that why I tattooed a web on my shoulder
Never said what im holdin cause in poker you bluff till the end
So the last hand the truth, stand up and you win.

J Roc: Why don’t you drop a punches piece on the site
And tell em whats up


Dare
Dropped my old flow paced the 8 but got Miles to go
Must be Valedictorian I topped Class a while ago
New styles cold, sharp shooter ya men’ll get hunted
How you rep ‘Young Money and Dead Presidents’, Benjamin Button
Back Track yet Frontin, ya’ll lack when you write
The truth is Anonymous needs to get back on this site.
Half of these cats haven’t even caught my interest
Claim you the king of ‘TR-uh’… doesn’t that make you a princess?
Some’ll say my shit aint change, I guess man sorta
Tired of getting Head Shot I fit the Cam’s Aura…
If you aint got the hand man than you should fold
My Balls find the White Hole, Tiger Woods Pole.
Get pale faced like that coke to Whit and Bobby
High Life, that ‘Endo-Needs-Ya’, I live in Jambi
Try and stop me, site stopped “Light Drops” like ‘Overkast’
No thunder, no wonder James don’t wanna show his ass.
Expose ya crap, remain Strictt what more can be told
I take the ‘S-A’s’ out like the Border Patrol,
I get blamed with shit how lame it is I was playin kids
‘Sweep’ it under the rug, Doctor Octavius…
Ame loses to Chambers and quits, got maimed I guess
Scott ‘comes’ and goes, change his name then splits.
Crazed with fame and rich, pockets are fat get lipo fast
But you got ‘Eyes On My Money’, call it ‘Geico Cash’
Claimin you hot shit big fame big stage, I call queer
Couldnt ‘Sell-Tics’ and thats the ‘Truth’ like Paul Pierce.
This text is just an advertisement, pre-game flyer
Bout to ‘See-Monster’, ‘Lock-Ness’ if he on that ‘PK Fire’
My rhymes were repetitive, most battles weak it’s the truth
Y’all got Z’s on me like you were asleep in the noose.
Best believe I step up my game, be Xpecting your name
I aint on some ‘Bitch Shit’, naw I aint ‘Beggin For FAME.’
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Re: Truth Or Dare

Postby tjb » May 2nd, '10, 17:48

so good :y: :y: :y:
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Re: Truth Or Dare

Postby Spyder » May 2nd, '10, 18:37

thanks guys. and yeah srry u dont get the punches Steve lol thanks for peeping

and cole, yeah the Dare piece was actually written before the X disses so thats why its not as good...
but that being said you can still post obviously wanna explain this to me...

and thanks tjb :y:
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Re: Truth Or Dare

Postby Fa-Q » May 2nd, '10, 20:00

Damn, I love this piece....for some reason it reminded me of suicidal thoughts by Big...but anyway...sooooo easy to flow, I don't think I've ever read a piece of TR that easy to flow. Word play was just ok for me but that was the only thing a little bit lacking. But structure and multis were there as always....good piece Spy
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Re: Truth Or Dare

Postby Ticalrecords » May 2nd, '10, 20:50

haha damn coleon reely took som time on tht post...
yea man the first part was siick its def worth recording, and i cud def see/hear how the flow wud be. the second part was fine too but u wudnt do the first verse justice by pairing them together yk.

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Re: Truth Or Dare

Postby Spyder » May 3rd, '10, 22:11

thanks faq and tical

and yea ill get to feeding soon
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Re: Truth Or Dare

Postby dR3 » May 3rd, '10, 22:27

I love the Truth piece.

Brilliant.
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Re: Truth Or Dare

Postby Yah-hah » May 5th, '10, 19:45

:worship: Sorry aint been on much. Damn bro some nice punches :y: Whole thing was pretty dope. Way to speak that shit straight from your chest. :y: Mad props
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Re: Truth Or Dare

Postby Spyder » May 6th, '10, 21:36

thanks dre and yah :b:
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Re: Truth Or Dare

Postby classthe_king » May 6th, '10, 21:44

The truth part was good, some nice storytelling in there, although I prefer songs about real life instead of a website. Was this suppossed to be directed towards me?
It wasn’t fair to you all, cause I wasn’t the best in my Class
I couldn't tell . . .

Dare part was ehhhhh. I didn't really like the punches that much. You must have started this piece a long time ago cause you told me you was dissing me at least a month ago :laughing:
You can do punches better but like you said earlier it was old.

Imma hit up MTM over the next couple days :y:
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Truth Or Dare

Postby Spyder » May 7th, '10, 00:05

yea the dare part was forever ago hahaha

and alright man, we still goin to that beat?
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Re: Truth Or Dare

Postby classthe_king » May 7th, '10, 00:08

Spyder wrote:yea the dare part was forever ago hahaha

and alright man, we still goin to that beat?


Hell yeah, that beat was epic
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Re: Truth Or Dare

Postby Spyder » May 7th, '10, 00:15

hell yea, once i get my mic back we gotta record that shit
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