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Sonar Blowjob

Postby Yah-hah » May 5th, '10, 20:23

Almost positive I've put this up already. If so fuck it

I'm just a kid in a mans world A kid with a tan girl,
As fans hurl lyrics with my hands curled,
Stuck in this bland world with so many damn pearls my hand swirls,
I'm stuck in this ocean full of sharks and horses,
Like my courses are horshit but of course it's important,
I'm warmed by seahorses and the ocean waves,
I'm a stowaway as I float for open days and hopefully I don't float away,
I speak gold until my voice box is thrown away,
There's no escape this rainbow speaks to my inner child,
I'm struck by the sinners' wild, thinner style,
And my mystical winter smile is stuck in the river while my chucks deliver files,
I'm not so sure the words that I speak,
Even land on this board so the keys never meet,
From the chucks on my feet to the ring on my finger,
Without luck I defeat heat in the seas that I linger,
I go to meet her in the waterfall where we kissed, do you remember that,
We had 6 drinks I think as soon as I blink it's December black,
The aura of my chorus is dropped in ten seconds,
It's been reckless since heaven was six seconds from ingestion,
I'm investin my whole life for this peice of cake,
Peice of cake? Is your peice of fate leeking hate,
In this bleeding state your feet can't take the streets this way,
You need to wait, come and sit down on this cloud with me,
Smoking cigars in Hiroshima, light it with this cloud of heat,
Where's the smokehouse, make four lefts and walk down the street,
Following the law of the jungle while on an anaconda's back,
Floating on the ocean and then you wander back,
Law of the world if your not fast then you're food,
So I'm stalkin chicks on my rocket ship and I'm enjoying the view.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Sonar Blowjob

Postby Fa-Q » May 5th, '10, 20:36

Ive read this before..so either you sent it to me or posted it..anyway...I remember loving that last couplet with an internal and then multi....oh and love that Smoking in Hiroshama line...
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Re: Sonar Blowjob

Postby Yah-hah » May 7th, '10, 09:19

Yeah the last line really flows for me. Thanks for checkin bro
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: Sonar Blowjob

Postby classthe_king » May 7th, '10, 19:41

Multi's were insane man :worship:
Keep doing your thing
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Sonar Blowjob

Postby Yah-hah » May 7th, '10, 23:17

classthe_king wrote:Multi's were insane man :worship:
Keep doing your thing


Thanks bro :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Sonar Blowjob

Postby ShaBruv » May 8th, '10, 14:01

haha nice one
I know you want to retaliate but you won't dare,
Cause you fuckin with some ****** like this who just don't care.

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