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Re: My life's story is quite gory and God won't fight for me

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 9th, '10, 19:22

Naw just only other song of mine you fed was the Native pride one lol
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: My life's story is quite gory and God won't fight for me

Postby Edge » Feb 9th, '10, 23:49

mad good shit bro... tbh i wasnt going to read it bc its mad long but than i saw the comments and had to.... and it is what everyone else already said... major props dude :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship:
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: My life's story is quite gory and God won't fight for me

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 12th, '10, 06:35

Edge wrote:mad good shit bro... tbh i wasnt going to read it bc its mad long but than i saw the comments and had to.... and it is what everyone else already said... major props dude :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship:


Appreciate it homie
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: My life's story is quite gory and God won't fight for me

Postby Terry_M » Feb 13th, '10, 04:54

That was just fucking amazing, no other way to say it. Simply brilliant.
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Re: My life's story is quite gory and God won't fight for me

Postby BabyBLue91 » Feb 13th, '10, 06:19

Wow, youre amazing. Having such great talent & being as strong as you are today, you should be proud of yourself. I honestly got chills while reading this
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Re: My life's story is quite gory and God won't fight for me

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 13th, '10, 07:47

Appreciate everyone who fed it, I know its pretty long. Means alot to me. Damn alot more people fed than I thought :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: My life's story is quite gory and God won't fight for me

Postby Arabian Shady » Mar 26th, '10, 20:14

that is un-be-fukin-lievable homie
like the startling imagery in this piece is just incredible. Lets ppl know that they shud be thankfull for what they have and should think 2wice befo doin some stupid shit.
i feel for you and im glad you founda new outlet.I also want to thank you for sharin this with us,it means a lot to me personally cause id think twice before sharin something SO personal with random ppl so for that i thank you
regardless of structure, flow and punches -"the works" i found this piece tooo damned good to be slept on
10/10

sorrie if im bumpin an old thread BUT i HAD to feed :b:
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: My life's story is quite gory and God won't fight for me

Postby Yah-hah » Mar 27th, '10, 17:48

Thanks big homie. I was really hesitant about postin it, but I figured I already wrote it, might as well share it with people who may appreciate it. Thanks for checkin brother
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: My life's story is quite gory and God won't fight for me

Postby Arabian Shady » Mar 27th, '10, 20:05

Its my pleasure man, makes me wana start writing descriptive again...for real :b:
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: My life's story is quite gory and God won't fight for me

Postby Wallace » Mar 28th, '10, 00:53

Arabian bumped this topic, and it was good.
I almost lost a capital masterpiece :worship:
Truly amazing, you will record it someday? :smoking:
All the pieces I saw from you had a kind dark feelin', now I can see why...
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Re: My life's story is quite gory and God won't fight for me

Postby Yah-hah » Mar 30th, '10, 14:29

Wallace wrote:Arabian bumped this topic, and it was good.
I almost lost a capital masterpiece :worship:
Truly amazing, you will record it someday? :smoking:
All the pieces I saw from you had a kind dark feelin', now I can see why...
:(


Damn homie I havent seen you in awhile wats been up. Thanks for checkin it homie :y: I had planned on recording it all when I get my recording ish, but I just ot a house and all that so money been pretty tight. Thanks for the feed bro
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: My life's story is quite gory and God won't fight for me

Postby Wallace » Mar 30th, '10, 16:46

I've been using net less than average, cuz i need to recover a period on university... I have to pass 2 hours a day studyin', at minimum. Since my tests will happen soon, around april 20th. I can't risk losing a whole semester again.... :tounge2:
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Re: My life's story is quite gory and God won't fight for me

Postby Yah-hah » Mar 30th, '10, 17:08

Dude I know exactly wat you mean, goin through the same shit bro
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: My life's story is quite gory and God won't fight for me

Postby Nick. Y » May 8th, '10, 16:33

this is blazing man.. damn.. I've been through shit, but if all this happened to you and you still pushing forward, it means you're a strong soul and this is something nobody can take away from you.. just keep walking.It seems you have a talent for writing, maybe you should consider it an inspiration and a new passion(if you haven't already began writing more, I don't know).This is something, which can give you strength,gives meaning in life and can keep you away from all kind of bullshit,that makes you collapse.At least this is the way I feel you know..Music has helped me in fucked up situations

Once again - props for this fine peace !
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Re: My life's story is quite gory and God won't fight for me

Postby Yah-hah » May 8th, '10, 17:08

Ha man thanks for checkin it out. Yeah I write alot, finishing up a book of poetry. Appreciate the feed bro :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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