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Extasy - Better Days (Plz do comment)

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Extasy - Better Days (Plz do comment)

Postby sanjiv2 » May 17th, '10, 10:28

Hey guys temme hows it??? I'm 15 and its one of my first attempts... If it ain't good at all, do give me some advise so that I improve in my next attempt :)


Intro: [Extasy]
Yeah, yeah, yeah
I wanna see them better days again
I'm goin crazy, I hope I don't lose my brain!

Verse 1 : [Extasy]

It was Feb 12th, 2009
When I had proposed you and after that you were mine
I can never define or express my love fo' you
But I don't know whether you loved me too
The two of us were so close like the shoe-strings which are tied in a shoe
You never used to admit to anybody that you were goin' on with me
Were you embarrassed? or was it for your safety?
I don't wanna remove any aggression or negativity
All am trying to say is I miss our daily meetings and activities
I miss you everyday, every motherfucking moment
Everybody knows, you kinda double timed me,
But I dont give a fuck, that shit is history
Oh, do you remember how we used to meet everyday?
Heh, in the garden! and we used to mostly avoid goin' to the malls
cause you were scared if your parents or your faggot brother would see you
And one day your parents did catch us, completely outta the blue!
We couldn't catch up after that, so you broke up wit me
I couldn't believe or agree at first, but I too had to break up on 13th August, 2009!
Yes I remember the dates, but you have started dating someone else
I still love you gal, but you going on with someone else!
I wish there would be any ways to get back from these convulse situations
I wanna start a new relation, there are so many temptations
Wanna pray everyday and I hope it gets fulfilled by 'The law of Attractions'
Is there any way I can get you back wit me to the same place we used to be together
Its a craze but I want to go back to those good old days (together!)
I just Wanna see them better days again...

Chorus : [Extasy]

Better days,
I want to go back to those better days
Where everyone was happy and everyone used to praise
Nowadays I feel no craze like those days
I feel like there's no sunlight, no fuckin' sun rays
By any ways, I wanna see the better days

Chorus : [Extasy]

Better days,
I want to go back to those better days
Where everyone was happy and everyone used to praise
Nowadays I feel no craze like those days
I feel like there's no sunlight, no fuckin' sun rays
By any ways, I wanna see the better days

Verse 2 : [Extasy]

Third Verse, it gets better than the first
If I say some controversial things you gonna make it sound worse!
Nah! I don't wanna be fuckin' cursed
What the fuck am I talking about? I feel so unrehearsed
I miss my school days, where we used to burst out laughin'
All the students used to have so much fun -
Talking, Laughing, Discussing, Cussing, Applauding, Rapping,
I miss the best days of my life - The 7th, 8th and the 10th grade
I was never betrayed, dissed or beaten up by any motherfucker in my whole school life
There were some nerds who used to just discuss the answers after each exam
and dream about the afterlife...
I used to feel like killin' all them nerds and wannabees with a knife!
I miss the locality, the house in which I used to stay before
Sometimes I remember everythin bad that has happen to me, So I shut the door and cry
I still feel the loss of my cousin brother who died in an accident when he was just 15!
I remember everything, shit I wasn't even a teen!
I still get dreams about him like he's comin' back, Yea I want him back
But now, he knows we are very upset after his death
So he presented us with a new baby - my new cousin baby brother, He's just 4!
What else do we want more?! He's cool, Maybe only the one whom I adore!
You know what everyone wants back?
The old good memories, dead members from their families, n so many other things!
Me? what do I want? Ah, all those fuckin' things mentioned above
And yeah most of all, my first love that was nothing but true love
I just wanna smell all the good things I have had in my whole life
and exhale all them bad things all together
I never want my parents to die, I want them forever!
I want all the rappers like B.I.G. n 'Pac who died to come back as same as they were, but greater!
I want to go back when I was innocent as a lil' kid
I want to know all the good deeds I ever did
I am going to "Ether" my enemies forever...
Yeah, Its a craze that I feel in this particular place, but I want to go back to those better days!

Chorus : [Extasy]

Better days,
I want to go back to those better days
Where everyone was happy and everyone used to praise
Nowadays I feel no craze like those days
I feel like there's no sunlight, no fuckin' sun rays
By any ways, I wanna see the better days

Outro: [Extasy]

Ah, better days is comin back
To everybody whom I know,
Keep yo' head up homies...
You gotta keep that smile on your face
Everythin's gonna be alright!
Just reminisce, and better days will come soon like this!
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Re: Extasy - Better Days (Plz do comment)

Postby gutawafang » May 18th, '10, 08:40

Flow is on and off man. Structure is not good, but fuck structure here cuz i can easily rap it out. LOL.

Lyrics are my cup of tea. Chorus not good.
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Re: Extasy - Better Days (Plz do comment)

Postby sanjiv2 » May 19th, '10, 08:57

Hmm thanks a lot gutawafang...
Im'a improve the chorus and the structure in my next rap :y:
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