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We Got A Problem - Afez Agyness Diss

Postby gutawafang » May 12th, '10, 10:01

A diss to that gay guy who slapped Ila.

Because Ila is too pretty to be slapped.

In case you don't know why I wrote this, there's a video in this page:
http://www.facebook.com/#!/group.php?gi ... 211&ref=ts

No edits/changes. Pure keystyle/freestyle except chorus. So, there's no flow.

I repeat, no flow.

Whatever shit that's got you hooked, it ain't a line you need to reel
But that shit's gots the Fish hooked, hell, who needs to chill?
Now! With words, do you think you got guts to swallow shit?
You can't even munch it, punchline, motherfucker, crunch it
Eat it like it's energy bars cuz you need it like you breathe it
Cuz you rising like a fucking star, tiny, leany little-weeny
Little pussy, soft, wack, this is murder, now your top's red
Then I'ma leave you there to rot, just like hiphop's state
Whether you slapped her to reenact shit, I'm still so reactive
My words so attractive, interactive, fucking radioactive
I said "attractive", look at how you figure the ground's a runway
I said "figure", you got it, so how you walk, Afez, it's gay
Afez? Fucking orgy? Get it? Is that a motherfucking fest?
Manifest the knowledge that I'm instilling, don't you protest!
Ini bukan kerana lu takde buah, lu dah buat, pikir balik
Skarang gua tendang lu pat bawah, lu confirm terpekik-pekik

Chorus:
If you gots the fucking balls, don't walk like you got none
If you gots the fucking brains, don't talk like you got none
If you gots your mind fucked by these words that hurts
Then call for a concert, free the birds with skirts

Scream like a bitch now, when I've removed your vocal chords
I know you like doing the "split", now I split you with swords
No respect I'ma give ya, disconnect your fucking joints
I mean every screw in your head, that's the critical point
You ain't gonna serve the army, you just serve this patty
This beef isn't a beef though, you're messing with Illuminati
I repeat, this isn't Ila, it's Ilu, get this straight
Blahahahahaha! Medicate your "blue waffle", you defecate
Look at how you dress, you think you're a magnet with that cleavage?
That shit isn't the trend whether it's those days or this age
I'ma stuck a pin between your boobs, and make you look for the grenade
Then you realize it's in your ass, then hiroshima displayed
Here's to future mascara murders, picture the beef in the damn burger
I swallowed you just like Ila swallowed when she was fucking afraid
This is to kick you while you're down, I'm the fucking bully
Who's the diva that shines now? It is Ila, the original jewelry
I don't see why I'm writing this, it's the concept of pain being enjoyed
The mindset of being bullied, and the respect that you destroyed
Aku rasa kau diam suak, atau lu nak bom dalam pepek engkau?
Hisap konek, gua tak heran, Afez-perempuan kimak panas gila

Chorus:
If you gots the fucking balls, don't walk like you got none
If you gots the fucking brains, don't talk like you got none
If you gots your mind fucked by these words that hurts
Then call for a concert, free the birds with skirts

No matter what, you don't hit a girl. No. A guy don't hit a girl. It's wrong. WRONG.

You don't hit Ila.
Last edited by gutawafang on May 18th, '10, 09:45, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: We Got A Problem - Afez Diss

Postby Edge » May 13th, '10, 03:21

it was a bit basic, flowed better than u made it out to sound haha
i liked it for a keystyle, but it lacked some multis/internal rhyme etc.... in other words i liked it but not ur best :y:
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Re: We Got A Problem - Afez Diss

Postby gutawafang » May 13th, '10, 03:22

Edge wrote:it was a bit basic, flowed better than u made it out to sound haha
i liked it for a keystyle, but it lacked some multis/internal rhyme etc.... in other words i liked it but not ur best :y:

thank you very much edge, for your honesty. yeah, it's not polished at all. :D
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Re: We Got A Problem - Afez Diss

Postby gutawafang » May 18th, '10, 09:44

b for bump :'(
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Re: We Got A Problem - Afez Agyness Diss

Postby Almostlity » May 18th, '10, 09:47

lmao at this clown and his walking style, fucking fag :shakehead:

Nice piece guta pwnd the fuck outta him
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Re: We Got A Problem - Afez Agyness Diss

Postby gutawafang » May 18th, '10, 09:55

Almostlity wrote:lmao at this clown and his walking style, fucking fag :shakehead:

Nice piece guta pwnd the fuck outta him

Thank you very much man. :happy:

I want to record it. and maybe finally make it big in my country. like... make everyone in my country listen to my song because everyone here hates him. naturally, they will like my song, rite? :happy:
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Re: We Got A Problem - Afez Agyness Diss

Postby classthe_king » May 21st, '10, 20:35

:laughing: What a tool

Good song :worship:
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Re: We Got A Problem - Afez Agyness Diss

Postby BILI » May 21st, '10, 20:52

Nice piece :y:

But who`s Ila?
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Re: We Got A Problem - Afez Agyness Diss

Postby gutawafang » May 24th, '10, 03:03

classthe_king wrote::laughing: What a tool

Good song :worship:

BLAHAHHAHA. thank you for checking it out man. :happy:

BILI wrote:Nice piece :y:

But who`s Ila?

The girl in the video who got slapped, if you watched it. ;)
thanks for checking man. :)
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