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few verses i wrote (beginner)

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few verses i wrote (beginner)

Postby mceddie » May 19th, '10, 22:43

every since i was sixteen
conditioned to think id grow up a trapper
would you ever picture me
trying to be a rapper
motivationless
salvationless
expectationless
tryin to run away from this
cause every day i miss
the days of no frustration but this
damnation of the nation
on our generation from the dedication
of these goddamn corporations
with their expectations of education and graduation
on these kids with pressure and frustration so they have this hesitation
to follow their own dreams and fascinations
instead we have all these IMITATIONS with no inspiration
and every one else lives in isolation
because to have an occupation is this fucking obligation
and if you dont then you owe an explanation to this damn administration
why do these kids have to be lawyers in a courtroom or doctors performing an operation
but fuck it lets just raise this nation raised with no vindication, constant regulation of our population
until a revalation of truth behind the situation, its too late and we cause our own self annilihation.




first verse is mostly michael jackson references :laughing:


yo listen up
they say im a smooth criminal
cause when i rhyme i kill the mic
your style could be ferrari
but ill still pass it on just a bike
im so hungry for the game,
ill slice your adams apple and eat it
your rhymes are bad ,
so like mr.jackson did, just beat it
cause this is it,
im comin hard wether im black or white cause im the thriller
yeah im the doppest spitter, hock a loogie and my verse still wont be a filler
ima wake this game up, you can sleep on me but the early bird gets the worm
donate just a penny to my rhymes foundation and watch em heal the world



you say you're a serial killer, so stop scannin the cereal barcodes at your local pharmaceutical
my rhymes are fickle, so sick theyll cut you up like a sharpened sickle
you can try to cut me back but like your pickle the most itll do is just a tickle
and when they hear you on the mic the most youll get is a giggle, or a bicker
yeah all these rappers talkin bout how they light it up cause they can pull a trigger
but when i light it up i light it bigger with just the use of my vigor
yeah like cheech and chong, you can light it up too, but im still smokin
you say that you go hard, but all you're doin is just strokin when im prevokin
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Re: few verses i wrote (beginner)

Postby mceddie » May 26th, '10, 08:56

no one?

anyway, here's a new one.

see i got that dope shit
so sick with it
never was a greater
since the apocolypse
oh wait, that hasnt happened yet
but it will by the time your speakers done with this
cause im king when it comes to havin to spit
im like a hungry man dinner
give me 5 minutes and ill be hot
and if you think you're the doc of this game
then go ahead hit me with your best shot
my rhymes are like the sharp edge of a knife
theyll cut your dull shit like u just got in a knife fight
i live that night life,
im a vampire only two teeth to draw blood
your shit barely makes a wave, but my shit hit likes a flood
my verses are contaminated and created with multi-syllables,
your verses could barely be called fillable
when you spit its like shootin fish in a barell
my shit murders so hard its sickly sinical
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