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Time Has Run Out

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Time Has Run Out

Postby J Roc » May 30th, '10, 08:43

Where's The Respect? I guess My Rep is Misplaced
i Could Write a Book, With 1 Sentance Per Page
But You Still Wont Mention My Name, Cuz At The End Of The Day?
Pictures Are Ever-Lasting But Memory's Fade
is it Cuz i Fell Off? I'll Be better in a Sec
God I Owe You Fame And I'll Be Forever In This Debt
I Owe You Life.. Just Don't Get My Girl Pregnant without Sex
Im Not Your Enemy, Damien Or The Devil In The Flesh
But i'll Date-a-Bitch in a Relationship but That Could Mean im Texting Her For Head
Go through Ur Hard Drive To Get My Cut Like Sharp Knives
Since ur Light -- Work We Can Go To Battle With The Dark Side
Whos To Know? Im Not Gonna.. Stop.. Until The Truth Is Told
If a Shadow Has Weight.. And ur Shoes Are Full
And U Breathe It in And let the Darkness Consume Your Soul
Yea u Let It Consume You, & Yes This Man's Devoured
But My Time Has Run Out Of This Sand Of Hours
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Re: Time Has Run Out

Postby gutawafang » May 31st, '10, 12:44

cool indirect multis. flow is on and off for me. the caps are confusing this time. :sweating:
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Re: Time Has Run Out

Postby Spyder » Jun 1st, '10, 00:34

looks like one of your pieces while your high and u really wanted to get it out there. not horrible but not good. punches were lack luster for you man.

need to drop the heat i know u can everytime :b:
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Re: Time Has Run Out

Postby Solace » Jun 8th, '10, 21:17

It was alright dude, far from good though. Just eh, nothing stood out pretty boring. You still got the rhymes and flow down though.
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