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A verse for y'all written by me

Postby Slim Shady 313 » May 29th, '10, 13:57

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Soon as my flow starts/I compose art like the ghost of Mozart/
Even though they all say that they're real I know that most aren't

Eminem/Stay Wide Awake/ Relapse 2009
Fuck Relapse/Im on the way to Recovery
Eminem/ Recovery/ June 22 2010
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Re: A verse for y'all written by me

Postby Wic Kid » May 29th, '10, 13:59

Your flow sucks.
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Re: A verse for y'all written by me

Postby kevinh » May 29th, '10, 14:15

i lol'd
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no meaning in life

I'm just gettin high, gettin high
Think of suicide, suicide
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Re: A verse for y'all written by me

Postby Tranquil » May 29th, '10, 14:34

i have to say that this might be one of the best written songs on tr :laughing:
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Re: A verse for y'all written by me

Postby gutawafang » May 31st, '10, 12:45

A mole? :unsure:
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Re: A verse for y'all written by me

Postby Eminem_Recovery » May 31st, '10, 15:31

Slim Shady 313 wrote:.


I think we have found our newest rap star. You should release that
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Now get off my dick/ dick's too short of a word for my dick/ get off my antidisestablishmentarinism you prick/ (Almost Famous)

Man get these wack cocksuckers off stage/ where the fuck is Kanye when you need him/ snatch the mic from him 'bitch I'ma let you finish in a minute',/ yeah the rap was tight but I'ma bout to spit the greatest of all time so you might wanna go back to the lab tonight/ (No Love)
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Re: A verse for y'all written by me

Postby Jaz » May 31st, '10, 15:35

I'd like to hear you record this.. I can't really get a feel of your flow just from reading it.

Nice multis though
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Re: A verse for y'all written by me

Postby ChronicJon » Jun 1st, '10, 02:24

Did Biggie Smalls ghostwrite this? This is a masterpiece
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