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chorus and first verse (Im here) any one wanna jump on it?

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chorus and first verse (Im here) any one wanna jump on it?

Postby nuke » Jun 5th, '10, 04:38

Chorus (singin)
IM here...//
aint no body kickin me outta here...//
Gotta love the smell of that club atmosphere...//
and shortie, i really dont care...//
if your with a player, or you just here for show...//
but im about to go, so...//
are you down for a one night stand?//
1st verse
Damn,all i want is a girl that know how to do that grind//
be able to find that spot thatll make a homie pop//
make it feel so good dont eva wanna stop,//
but gotta hop on top//
your strong like a stalion//
got me padlin that ass when u fail to make it clap//
call yo girl im fine wathcn u fuck wit a strap.//
track star after ill have u runnin laps,//
so loud wonderin if your lung gon collapse//
wonderin how the hell that tong stayin on dat ass?//
ima reamain talkn this dirty trash//
in yo ear,//
till im carryin your drunkin dairyair//
up the super8 flight of stairs//
fuckin you w.o a care//
because you know..
Chorus
... thoughts on it , oppinions keep in mind i am new to this, n if any one wanna get a verse on it let me know..
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Re: chorus and first verse (Im here) any one wanna jump on it?

Postby macdaddy019967 » Jun 5th, '10, 04:42

wow ur fucking dope
nah you would murder me if i got on this track with you
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Postby ChronicJon » Jun 5th, '10, 05:00

macdaddy019967 wrote:wow ur fucking dope
nah you would murder me if i got on this track with you

Sarcasm or songwriting is the easiest thing to do
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Postby Solace » Jun 5th, '10, 06:05

macdaddy019967 wrote:wow ur fucking dope
nah you would murder me if i got on this track with you

Lol you a dick.
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