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Serious Business

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 5th, '10, 20:33

I wear metal linked chest plates,
and every though I think, sends hate, and it frusterates, in an enclave
guarded an Angel locksmith, body toxins
poisonous oxygen, that it's locked in...
where I'm boxed in, visuals, of nothing, just blank space
and I can't take, you for offering a ritual
to backspace, or erase, everything I've gone through
On two, not three is when I really bomb you
particles of article, clothing, holding a part of you
together like turnakits, You a burden bitch, PARDON YOU
I'mma murder it, purposely, written verses in curvise
bursting your permanent, motherfucker break your fuckin' heart it two
You could see me stalking you, walking through the park
with a devil on a leesh, Dante level's just the start
My inferno is a piece of art, darkness in the weakened heart,
sparking in to breach a part of people just to teach it, WALK
Do you see me speaking DOG, Get the FUCK outta here....
Get the fuck outta here.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Serious Business

Postby Verses » Jun 5th, '10, 23:52

"with a devil on a leesh, Dante level's just the start
My inferno is a piece of art, darkness in the weakened heart"

Dope piece overall, but those two lines were epic.
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Re: Serious Business

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 6th, '10, 21:06

Verses wrote:"with a devil on a leesh, Dante level's just the start
My inferno is a piece of art, darkness in the weakened heart"

Dope piece overall, but those two lines were epic.

:flower:
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Re: Serious Business

Postby gutawafang » Jun 7th, '10, 02:43

Fucking demonic. :)
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Re: Serious Business

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 7th, '10, 15:42

gutawafang wrote:Fucking demonic. :)

:8)
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