Sentus- Mark of the Manic

[classthe_king]

Beware.

I was formed in the darkest part of the planet
Bleeding cyanide as I rose scarred from a sand pit
In a cloud of arsine, claws sharp as mechanic’s
Tools, with fangs and scales harder then granite
I am startin a panic, ptyalizing tar as volcanic
Ash erupts from my fingers, enlargin the damage
The absolute most heinous dark has been planted
In my soul and soon my heart had then vanished
Clutchin limbs, jaws like a shark when I slam it
Don’t believe me; I bear the mark of the manic
Each bar I am chantin, beshrewin your entire team
My regime spits fire streams till you die in steam
I’m a higher king watch me leave a writer mauled
I admire yall but fuck a clip I spit naga fireballs
Who can out rap who almost blew his fuckin brains out?
No one can stop me, I’m spewin fuckin flames now
Who can want the blame now? Stompin ya bones
The worst monster to roam has conquered the throne
I felt gaunt and alone after the lies were released
It formed a lyrical calamity derived from the beast
No one’s more violent on beats. You won’t beat us
I’ll rape a bitch and rip the baby out her stomach
Put it down her throat so she chokes on her own fetus
So don’t lead us on, I can hope as I’m slicin throats
And the bloods comin down her chest, around her breast
And she’s runnin that I’m lovin when chasin her
Having fun when embracing her and laughin when
Stabbin in leavin gashes in her perfectly crafted skin
As I’m slashin you can’t fathom the madness I’m havin
So graphic, I’ve had it with these bitches and faggots
So fuck you Jessie, fuck you Zach, fuck you Myers
Fuck you Nick, fuck you Jake and fuck you liars
Who have pretended to be with me and care how I felt
Cause I don’t give a fuck about you or anyone else

[DƎRDYPK]

very dope piece bro
really digging it
digging it a hole somewhere so I can stick my dick in it
nice job

[Solace]

You telling me that it wasn't good, fuck I loved this. Your entire rhyme schemes were siick until

No one’s more violent on beats. You won’t beat us
I’ll rape a bitch and rip the baby out her stomach
Put it down her throat so she chokes on her own fetus
So don’t lead us on, I can hope as I’m slicin throats
And the bloods comin down her chest, around her breast
And she’s runnin that I’m lovin when chasin her
Having fun when embracing her and laughin when

That entire part I really couldn't flow with?

But after that it got good again. Good stuff.

[Spyder]

loved the beggining through middle, reminded me of inhuman and shit was tight

then it like switched to peeps im assuming at your school or something and it switched vibes way to much for me

overall dope piece, maybe im reading it wrong but seemed like a major topic switch

[classthe_king]

Solace, if you heard the beat it would flow. There's like a pause in the beat and instead of pausing the rap I just I just keep flowing and it works.

And spyder, ill probably take the end out if I ever record it but this was mostly a venting piece. I started out like it was a metaphore but I just kept getting more and more pissed and ended up just saying that.

[Spyder]

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