Contender(quick) tryin new stuff

[Just Silver]

Im the new contender tender from cons Is what im inter
Ested Best at, the raps infested
The glory of speech has been detected
Maury Povich lets get depression
Started in each section, bless for the restless
Tested but Test-less,Invest chips
In presses,of weight on daily direction
Shoulder complexion, Champion Stat
Family is back, To cheer on like sitcoms
But i have had my thoughts, my shares
To try to have bought, and seen through the game like eyewear
The "close" that is "By" here is all day
The folks beat, strings of hopeless teeth,
ridden in defeat, of have been bitten in the reap

[Fa-Q]

I don't like when words are separated on different lines like you did on some of these line but overall liked the flow....good stuff JS

[Just Silver]

I don't like when words are separated on different lines like you did on some of these line but overall liked the flow....good stuff JS

Thanks guy

[classthe_king]

You're getting pretty good at these quick little verses. Try some full songs now

[Just Silver]

You're getting pretty good at these quick little verses. Try some full songs now

I tried one lol i might repost it if thats alright.,
its hard for me to stay on subject when i always want to branch out words