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HOW MANY BARS!

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HOW MANY BARS!

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 7th, '10, 22:16

Beginning of the song

How many.... How many.... How many.... How many
How many.. how many.. H-HOW MANY BARS! X2

I've been a veteran,
Lyrically showing, exposing a different type of omen
to people knowing that I'm better than
Everybody I've ever dealt wit
Every beat I've touched I've melted, Is it cause I'm selfish
That everybody wanna hate, and wanna be a rattle snake
and babble fake gibberish, and thinking that I'm in to it?
that's addict trait insanity, you faggot,
I've had it, with bad boy wanna bes, introduce you to maggots
and honestly, you is nothing but a fly on the wall
your body be, breaking, spread your fucking eyes on it all
It's sodomy, no apologies, you faggots had it coming
grab a gun and, strap a bomb in my palm and rap it thunderous
This midget angered this, you wondering if I will mention names?
FUCK THAT, oil on fire, put mexico in flames
(PENDEJO)
Oh shit, Nigga hold this
(BRAT BRAT)
Leave your body in the ocean

How many.... How many.... How many.... How many
How many.. how many.. H-HOW MANY BARS! X2
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: HOW MANY BARS!

Postby Solace » Jun 8th, '10, 21:05

Hmm, written I can't get the flow. But that goes for a lot of the stuff you show me on MSN then in audio it sounds great so I won't judge that 'til now...Your vocabulary is always top notch. Your rhymes seem bleh, but that also goes with the flow 'cause written I can't really see the sort of internals you've hidden everywhere lol. Keep at it my nig.
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Re: HOW MANY BARS!

Postby mcZu » Jun 8th, '10, 21:10

Agree with Omarkevelli, you can do way better, though. It's still dope.
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