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Ambitionz Az A Ridah (Chronic Mix)

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Ambitionz Az A Ridah (Chronic Mix)

Postby ChronicJon » Jun 5th, '10, 03:49

Written to Ambitionz Az A Ridah and it's only the first verse :sweating:
You might not catch the flow by itself so flow it with the song playing if you want.
Ambitionz Az A Ridah: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YT_yxs_-J1M

[Verse 1]
Always ready to spit bars, no need to wish on stars,
Illmatic just like Nas, I’m out of this world like Mars,
My attitude look above it, even if you hate it or love it,
Your probably jealous of it, so motherfucker suck it,
To be older, you gotta be mature so please,
Though I know I’m hated, I love and enjoy being me,
Uhhh, and my ambitionz az a ridah,
To save hip-hop cause she used to be a fighter,
She’s having a dilemma but she won’t tell me yo,
Talking some weird shady shit like she selling dope,
Many rappers came and fucked you up as usual,
Mostly the dirty south, just know they used you,
So many cold prayers, to finally stop these supposed players,
Getting showered in riches, so now how you gon’ pay us,
I’m on real wicked mission, on it still, so I’m risking,
Ambitions of other rappers, on that bullshit, blessings,
I’ma shine though, my raps is hot it’s mandatory,
Before I end up on crunk shit my music I’ll horror core it,
Now, it’s on ‘til it’s dawn because I said so,
Or it rains cause a player like me can’t look like a wet hoe,
Now, these hoes and stupid vicious bitches getting some riches,
Leaving me in my corner rotting and screaming my dumb wishes,
But I try not to get into any lame fight,
If people or words can’t kill me fame might,
My fate on earth always dangles like a wheelie,
The direction I’m going in is no good believe me,
Uhhh, yeah, before I get this track to ride ya,
I’m hopin' you listen, I catch you paying attention to my ambitionz az a ridah,
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Re: Ambitionz Az A Ridah (Chronic Mix)

Postby ChronicJon » Jun 5th, '10, 18:22

.....bump? :'(
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Re: Ambitionz Az A Ridah (Chronic Mix)

Postby Solace » Jun 8th, '10, 21:23

This wasn't as good as the other piece I read from you. Your rhymes were really Am on this. It was a decent piece compared to others here, but depending on when you wrote this you needa get your multi-concepts up along with using some better diction.
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Re: Ambitionz Az A Ridah (Chronic Mix)

Postby ChronicJon » Jun 9th, '10, 01:55

Solace wrote:This wasn't as good as the other piece I read from you. Your rhymes were really Am on this. It was a decent piece compared to others here, but depending on when you wrote this you needa get your multi-concepts up along with using some better diction.

I get ya. I just thought that I'd put multis exactly where 2Pac put 'em. Next song will be totally mine so don't worry :y:
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