NEW bandit - RAMBLING (drop links)

[j3andit]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/7787694622a67309/

sup ya'll..just a track I did to shake out some cobwebbs.. any feedback is appreciated I will return the favor.

[Terry_M]

I was really feeling the lyrics, and your style. Maybe the flow could have been a bit better, but youve definitely got something going.

[j3andit]

thanks for the feedback bro, glad you appreciated the lyrics, cuz thats all I'm really proud of in this song..like I said just shakin out some cobwebs.

[classthe_king]

What was that beat I know I've heard it before

Anyway technically this was all good, you had alright lyrics, alright flow and all that, it was just kind of boring. You have to find some way to make yourself original and stand out.

[j3andit]

thanks for the feedback bro, greatly appreciated

im still workin on finding my voice with this mic, cuz it's pretty damn shitty, and i have like no bass behind my voice because of it...but I'm working on the entertainment factor hahaha, I tried harder with the lil interludes and adlibs, but I'll keep workin on it