RiseFromTheAshez vs mceddie (VOTE OR DIE)

[mceddie]

you're about to get burned, don't try to rise from the ashes
you write a line and try to improvise and it clashes while mine slashes
itll take more than a magical miracle for you to win, this isnt a card trick
im spittin ace, while you aint pullin out jack shit, slick
ive got the pitch to a show, while you just glitch real slow like you broke
now watch me switch up my flow, while you ditch it and blow till you choke
im the most wise, arise disguised with a surprise cuz when i devise my rhymes i always comprise the prize
i advise you to revise your lines, don't reprise, you just met your demise so just say your last goodbyes

nice verse, dude
not my best though.

[mceddie]

hey man, i hope its cool but i dont have time to drop my verse today, is it cool if i drop it tomorrow? got work, then party tonight. :P

[mceddie]

last one was 8 lines, atleast i thought so. you said flippings allowed right?

only thing i pass out is the fire to extuinguish doubt
you spit on me? anything else you wanna lie about?
what's with all the gay jokes, bro, got something to hide?
your pride commited suicide after you submitted your subside
come on admit it, you got fried by my acquitted stride
im'a win this by a landslide, i don't need to watch 8 mile
all the while, you're jackin off to rabbit thinkin you're gona aqcuire his style
gay jokes man?, be a little more versatile so this will be more worthwhile

[mceddie]

good luck

thanks likewise

[TheHundred$]

*Dies*

[shadyfreakzul]

lol why vote or die?

[mceddie]

I don't really know but I think you guys should vote

[gutawafang]

How do you vote on two rounds? I mean, how? LOL.

Okk. I'll vote round by round.

First round:
Eddie had more punches and complexity. Rise had good flow. But ya know, mentioning "moms" is not good. I vote Eddie for the first round.

Second round:
Sorry. It's pretty clear that Eddie had better flips in this round. He really took advantage of flipping. Rise still had better flow in my opinion. But yeah, i vote Eddie in this round.

So basically, I vote Eddie.

[gutawafang]

^ I apologize for voting then.

[mceddie]

[gutawafang]

^ I apologize for voting then.

its not that, i just dont like you not liking my lines just cause i said something that might be offensive for you, they're only jokes, what im tryin to say is like, suppose eddie says "ill fuck you mom" or whatever , I mean its something thats just supossed to be funny, I dont even know eddie in real life, i dont know where hes from or anything like that, so who cares, its only a battle for fun

But sometimes it's preference man. Ya see, it all comes down to whose verse I enjoy better and I'll vote that person. I was just breaking it down a little bit so at least there's reasons as to why I vote that particular person man.

I understand what you mean by it's only jokes and that we all don't know each other at all. but in battles certain "gay jokes" or "parents punchlines" are too overused that I get bored of it. Ya dig?

[gutawafang]

but funny
even eddie admitted it, i also admit he had a funny flip, the "you got somethin' to hide" was funny, and i dont even care, cause its only text battle, even if it was a real rap battle I'd probably laugh at the stuff he would say to diss me, cause thats how I am, ive seen battles where the dude just freaks out and starts a fight cause he got dissed, and I dont even know why, everythin ppl say to each other are 90% made up

yeah man. I dig that. but you accept my vote? i mean, i'd still vote for eddie man.

[gutawafang]

yeah man. I dig that. but you accept my vote? i mean, i'd still vote for eddie man.

what if I were to change "you're gay" to "you're a fag", would that change your decision? lol haha :P

blahahhahahaa. nah man. in this battle, in my personal opinion, eddie is better in terms of complexity and punches. you were good, but he was better.

[Enimee]

Yeah RFTA kept a solid strucure even tho it was a simple scheme

mceddie was more lyical but it didnt flow good and it sounded like you were strectchin for some shit

idk overall ima say mceddie cause he came a lil harder

[mceddie]

thanks for the vote guys, i do agree i need some practice with my flow, im just a beginner. i got ideas but dont know how to execute them 100%.