Yah-hah vs TJthaGreat [TJ Wins3-2]

[Yah-hah]

12 lines no flipping. Shoutout to Guta

TJthaGreat, ah shit I dont know who the fuck this guy is,
You beatin me? Chances are pretty slim with that half ass rhymin,
Got a better chance of having your dead body discovered by blind kids,
Who's eyes been pried with knives and stomped in by Red Chucks thats size 10,
You lost to Guta, the dude I made ninja vanish single-handedly,
He ate you like dinner was a kitten sandwhich with his family,
The only dumbass to actually write out a 300 post shoutout,
So I'm trappin you in a spartan pit listen to 300 ghost shout out,
Just bow down to the real multi king you're just the Jester in my court,
I'll put the bomb target on your moms carpet now its redder than your core,
Rhymes lookin like the boring version of class if his rhymes were never hurtful,
I gotta get back to the office shit I'm just writing during the comercials,

The line about you and class was just me sayin yall both have near perfect structure lol and my bad Fish
Lol but on the real you're a cool guy look forward to workin with you man Good luck

[ThomasJ]

If Yah thinks he's lyrical,really tho,I'll leave his skull ripped in two
Like the idiot who wanted to seem real cool and do a head dive,but missed the pool
I got the sickest tools,a sickle-two,missiles too that'll be hittin' you
I'll win in full,cuz this dude ain't nothing but shit on a chair,a "Sitting Bull"
Better vest up just in case of...matter of fact son,just get a respirator
Cuz when I'm done with you'll be more fucked up than sex in elevators
You don't need the best investigators to tell you your flesh's in danger
The Tech'll slay you,then I'll hide your body parts in a baby's manger
And the whole world knows that Yah-hah is gay,indeed a Charles Dickens
This guy chases guys faster than Usain Bolt chases a piece of fried chicken
This dude's a chick,a Pocahontas,and I'll act like a crazy Samaritan
Give him a hand,then kill the shit outta him,now he's a dead Native American

[ThomasJ]

First of all,no disrespect to Native Americans LOL
Second of all,in case you don't know,there was this dude that decided jump from a box into the sea,but terribly missed LOL http://robert-lindsay.blogspot.com/2009/10/face-split-diving-accident-video.html?zx=b7296a0c61cd48df
shit on a chair=sitting bullshit,Sitting Bull=a Native American chief
Charles Dickens is said to have a gay surname,DICK LOL
Usain Bolt is black duh LOL (no disrespect to Blacks)
Samaritans are good people that help
anyway,Yah,I really enjoyed your verse

[Yah-hah]

Yeah I was really impressed with it lol sitting bul line was cool nver heard that one before. Good job man

[BILI]

I vote Yah,TJ was dope until the gay thing,its kinda lame and played out imo

[ThomasJ]

Thanks for the vote.

[Robbie G]

Punchlines - tjthagreat
Personals - tie
Multies - tie
Flow - yah-yah
Structure - tie
Vocab/Complex - tjthagreat

tj wins 5-4

Good battle guys, it was pretty even. I thought tj had some better punchlines that were a little bit more personal. I did like yah-yah's line about making a 300 post shoutout though.

Good battle, keep it up.

[ThomasJ]

Thanks a lot man.

[gutawafang]

Oh my God. This is a dope battle man. I thought yah did good. But TJ did good too!

Fuck it. I'ma break it down then.

Punchlines - Draw
Personals - Yah
Multies - Draw
Flow - Draw
Structure - TJ
Vocab/Complex - TJ
Other- Facepalm to TJ's Dickens line LOL

I vote TJ. Quite a hard decision. Both of you did fucking good man. Nice battle.

[Yah-hah]

Yeah man was a good verse, the gay thing is extra played out (lol I'm engaged too) but other than that

[J Roc]

Rhymes : Yahhhh Hahaha Close
Flow : Yahhhh
Structure : TJ
Wordplay : TJ ... Sittting Bull
Nameplay : None
Punchlines : TJ
Personals : Yah


My Votes Alot Of Help ... 3-3 Hahaha

[Yah-hah]

lol you mean 2-2?

[ThomasJ]

Bump.

[classthe_king]

lol you mean 2-2?

No, his vote was tied 3-3

[asid12345678]

TJ for me


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