Robot vs TJthaGreat (TJ Wins)

[ThomasJ]

8 lines,no flipping.

[Robot]

I wouldn't help out this guy's "friend not even if he included me in his "300 post shout out",
I'd rather "kill all cats in the world" before I help him out,
& it makes me feel even better when I scream and shout
Maybe when I'm free i'll show "your mother" & give her a 11 out of 10,
Because even tho she was looking at other men while giving me head,
That's nothing compared to what we did on the bed,
Maybe i'll go bump some "teflon don" & NOT GIVE IT A 8,
Because I know this mother fucking rick ross shit isn't that "GREAT"


1. explains his help his friend out, & 300 post shout out
2. explains viewtopic.php?f=29&t=47498&p=1292833#p1292833
3. showing "your mother" explains that he put "your mother" in white less in his sig you could see it if you highlight it, where it says 11/10
4. explains the "bumping teflon don & giving it a "eight"
5. & the great in capitals explains his name.


I mean it's not good, but it's better then the work I did in the passed, I'll say.

[ThomasJ]

Okay,Robot,let me put you out your misery once and-for-all
I'll crush you like a can,then-you'll-fall,start taking Demerol
Wait,let me make this shit a lot doper,by adding in-cocaine
Do you really think you're gonna win battles by saying:"He's-so-lame"?
Robot is about-to-short-circuit,I'll let him win like-he's-so-worth-it
You shouldn't have responded to my call out,you twenty one-year-old-virgin
Your rhymes are simple,you don't have a flow,you-suck
Just go to the junkyard,will you? 'cause you're all-used-up

[ThomasJ]

My verse sucks donkey balls.

[Robbie G]

Punchlines - Tie
Personals - tie
Multies - tj
Flow - tj
Structure - tj
Vocab/Complex - tj

tj wins 6-2

Neither were bad but I thought tj's was much better. I don't really understand Robots first line and it just sounded extremely awkward to me. The whole "I'm screwing your mother" thing as also really played out and kinda turned me off of your verse. I did really like your last line though the way you talked about Ross and his name.

Good battle.

[Robot]

I did really like your last line though the way you talked about Ross and his name.

Thanks man

Robot - 0
TJthaGREAT - 1

[BILI]

TJ by far,even tho this time Robot wasnt that bad

[Robot]

TJ by far,even tho this time Robot wasnt that bad

Thanks

Tj - 2

Robot - 0

[Robot]

C'mon let's end this shit !

[gutawafang]

i vote TJ

[Robot]

K.O

[gutawafang]

K.O

word. change the thread title.

[Robot]

K.O

word. change the thread title.

I can't. He made the thread

[gutawafang]

K.O

word. change the thread title.

I can't. He made the thread