please give examples... my sig is an example of what i think is fantastic rhyming.Tash8 wrote:Stan has fantastic rhyming.
buffalo bill wrote:Lyrics of Mockingbird are very emotional and personal but what are they other than that? They don't really tell me anything.
jpmutanguha2009 wrote:I don't get why tons of people will bash songs like "Mockingbird", "Beautiful", "Talkin' 2 Myself", "When I'm Gone", etc for having "lazy writing" and yet consider "Stan" one of his greatest? Is there something about the writing "Stan" I'm missing? Because I'm pretty sure the rhyming in "Stan" isn't up to "Eminem standards". I admit that the rhyming isn't good, and he's done better "meaningful" songs like "Deja Vu" or "Rock Bottom", but if you're going to call these songs horrible, please don't be a fucking hypocrite and go on to say "Stan" is a classic.
MikeNUFC wrote:Stan's rhyming is a million times better than Mockingbird, Talkin 2 Myself and When I'm Gone's rhyming. Plus it's great storytelling, which is fucking hard to do.
Stan is also in the form of letters so the rhyming HAS to be slightly toned down.
jpmutanguha2009 wrote:So now Stan is excused for poor rhyming because it's in letter form? So why are you so harsh on Mockingbird? Because he didn't start the verses with "Dear Hailie,"? or Talking 2 Myself could just have started with "Dear listener,"... so if these songs had started like this, would you (Mike & Evan) still think they're horrible songs? or would you say, "nothing groundbreaking but still nice/ok-song, writing could have been better but since it's in letter form it's alright."?
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