FACK......

[Elision]

Nollie, you mad?

Beyond belief.

[Solace]

Plus, its got some excellent multies

"I ain't seen no shit like this..... this bitch can twist like a damn contortionist
Condom on my dick of course it is, this bitch don't know what abortion is "

Lmao@Those being considered "excellent".

No shit like this - This bitch can twist

The words "No" and "This" don't rhyme, so don't bold those two. It's really "Shit like this" compared to "Bitch can twist". A weak 3 syllable rhyme considering the 2nd syllable doesn't rhyme. C'mon Eminem. Surely a kid like me can match that...

Beat ya raps, defeat ya crap

Yeah. Weak and simple.


Contortionist-Of Course It Is-What Abortion Is

The word "What" shouldn't be bolded, it's not apart of his rhyme scheme. It's just three 4-syllable rhymes, decent enough, but not excellent if this is supposed to be coming from someone hailed as the greatest rapper alive to many. A stupid little kid like me can match that:

No stopping the sound, you'll get shot with a round,
Get got with that wristwatch walking around,

If I can match all of these "excellent multies"...Then what am I? A great writer? Please.

Weak rhymes
Stupid concept
Annoying chorus
Retarded verses
Gerbils...?
Horrible song.

[classthe_king]

Plus, its got some excellent multies

"I ain't seen no shit like this..... this bitch can twist like a damn contortionist
Condom on my dick of course it is, this bitch don't know what abortion is "

Lmao@Those being considered "excellent".

No shit like this - This bitch can twist

The words "No" and "This" don't rhyme, so don't bold those two. It's really "Shit like this" compared to "Bitch can twist". A weak 3 syllable rhyme considering the 2nd syllable doesn't rhyme. C'mon Eminem. Surely a kid like me can match that...

Beat ya raps, defeat ya crap

Yeah. Weak and simple.


Contortionist-Of Course It Is-What Abortion Is

The word "What" shouldn't be bolded, it's not apart of his rhyme scheme. It's just three 4-syllable rhymes, decent enough, but not excellent if this is supposed to be coming from someone hailed as the greatest rapper alive to many. A stupid little kid like me can match that:

No stopping the sound, you'll get shot with a round,
Get got with that wristwatch walking around,

If I can match all of these "excellent multies"...Then what am I? A great writer? Please.

Weak rhymes
Stupid concept
Annoying chorus
Retarded verses
Gerbils...?
Horrible song.

Yeah its a horrible song. But those first two lines aint bad.




I just posted that because I needed a shifty cause I want to save the picture

[Leech]

I like it...

He has made a lot of funny songs and this is certainly one of them. sure it lacks reply value but it's still fun to me.

And the fact he put this track on his greatest hits... thats one of the reasons I fucking love this man

[Solace]

You can just save it in the right bar when you're posting.

[classthe_king]

oh

Didn't know that

[Fleka]

hate it
who puts a track like that on their greatest hits album?
especially as the 1st track?

Eminem

[RadicalMGuy]

This is still more than 30 times better than anything any single one of you will ever create or even have any part in creating in your entire lifetime, before now, now, and later on. If you people had any kind of creativity or originality at all, you wouldn't be here complaining about an obscure song from an undisputedly good rapper.

[DƎRDYPK]

This is still more than 30 times better than anything any single one of you will ever create or even have any part in creating in your entire lifetime,

[MikeNUFC]

Derdy > A Star

[DƎRDYPK]

Derdy > A Star

I'm quoting that

& saying

WHO SAYS I CAN'T GET STONED?!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B2i24AQYB_8

[MikeNUFC]

DerdyPK til I die.

WHISKET AND MILK. TRY IT

[BILI]

Whoever hates this song is a retard.Its prolly one of the best songs ever.

[DƎRDYPK]

Whoever hates this song is a retard.Its prolly one of the best songs ever.

i hope your talking about my song?

[MikeNUFC]

Whoever hates this song is a retard.Its prolly one of the best songs ever.

DONT DISS DERDY

DERDY IS FWIEDN