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Sajjad - The Darkest Motherfucker To Date

Postby Xray » Aug 24th, '10, 22:27

This is the first track off my solo tape. I am going for a dark theme, very dark theme... Anyways this isn't finished, it needs a third vese and a hook. I made the beat at the same time I wrote these verses. I didn't go for no lyrical feel, so if the lyrics might seem basic, then you know why. Quiet frankly, people are forgetting about the enjoyment in making tracks, so instead they make lyrics. I don't want to do the same mistake as them, whether they realize it or not. This is a concept track, and not a bag of lyrical amunition. Thank you. Now please take the time to listen and feed.

Welcome to my palace, to the foulest
To my Alice, to my wonderfucl world
In the mountains, no flowers
Only darkness, and long hours
Welcome to my cavalry, to my savagery
To my larceny, cause I stole your heart beat
Trus me you don't want no lights on
In this quiet storm, breeds of life form
different to where you're born
Yeah you've been warned, and you've been gone
So they're quiet fond, to where you been on
Where you stepped on, where you ate from
What you rest on, and what you peed on
Kill yourself, and you will die and regenerate bigger than before
Scream for help, and they will come hunting you down
like it was surround sound and give you the trigger you bought, it's war.

I'm in the shelter room, smelling Delta goons
Tryina escape from my premises, I'm sending whom?
My creatures, my reapers, they'll get you soon
Eat your flesh from your wound like a fucking raccoon
You think this is Doom? OK wait till I pause
With full force you feeling my paws cause, I'll eat your source
and then I'll motherfucking hit resume
And look for the other motherfuckers tomb
As he runs into my tower, looking for intel
I'll make the world shower blood cause his been dealt
This is my tortorous kingdom
I said this is my tortorous kingdom
And no one's leaving this building
A scorcerers system, leave no gap for resistance
Send you out of the Orbit if I ordered you to
Put a halo round your head and call you Goku


The Darkest Motherfucker To Date

I'll return your feed, don't worry. Peace.
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Re: Sajjad - The Darkest Motherfucker To Date

Postby DƎRDYPK » Aug 24th, '10, 22:35

this is dope cuzz
I love the beat & what you did with it :sweating:
can't wait to hear the new tape :b:
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Re: Sajjad - The Darkest Motherfucker To Date

Postby mcZu » Aug 24th, '10, 22:42

Brilliant flow. I loved the second verse. Lyrics aren't too bad as you made them ought to be, great delivery and an awesome beat. Really, I can't find anything to complain about, maybe just halfway the first verse where you rushed a couple of words to keep up with the flow. But that's it. And it's just nit picking. Good job. Can't wait to hear the final version.
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Re: Sajjad - The Darkest Motherfucker To Date

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 24th, '10, 22:54

the beat is dark as fuck man, a nice change from what ppl usually put out.
The lyrics go well with the beat , make ppl actually wana listen to 'em both, give the track an edge...makes then enjoy the track
Dope stuff man, glad the album is comin thru finally :b:
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Re: Sajjad - The Darkest Motherfucker To Date

Postby classthe_king » Aug 24th, '10, 23:17

Dude, this is sick as fuck. You got my favorite style on TR. This new mixtape is going to be epic :worship:
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Re: Sajjad - The Darkest Motherfucker To Date

Postby M-Pyre » Aug 24th, '10, 23:22

now thats dope !

dope beat! props on producing it! anyways, I'm loving that slow flow you roll on, gives the track a nice edge if you know what I mean. the beginning of your first verse really sts it off man, sounds like an intro or something. if it was intended then you did a perfect job man, props!

to bad there's no chorus cause you probably would have murked that to. mixing sounds about right and your flow was consistantly on point.

edit: ahh, I see your still planning on making a chorus, nice!

can't wait to hear more.
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Re: Sajjad - The Darkest Motherfucker To Date

Postby 77o77 » Aug 24th, '10, 23:47

Im not gunna lie this is honestly dope as fuck. I really felt the beat for the most part and loved your flow through this whole song.
I cant wait to dwnload ur new tape. Hopefully i get good enough one day to hit up some serious shit wit chu. knowa im sayin.

I gotta give you major props for this shit bro. keep it real, and never change.
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Re: Sajjad - The Darkest Motherfucker To Date

Postby Xray » Aug 25th, '10, 00:37

DƎRDYPK wrote:this is dope cuzz
I love the beat & what you did with it :sweating:
can't wait to hear the new tape :b:

Thanks bro, you the shit yourself, so it's much appreciated.

mcZu wrote:Brilliant flow. I loved the second verse. Lyrics aren't too bad as you made them ought to be, great delivery and an awesome beat. Really, I can't find anything to complain about, maybe just halfway the first verse where you rushed a couple of words to keep up with the flow. But that's it. And it's just nit picking. Good job. Can't wait to hear the final version.

Haha wait till someone else starts hating. Mad props for the feed bruh.

Arabian Shady wrote:the beat is dark as fuck man, a nice change from what ppl usually put out.
The lyrics go well with the beat , make ppl actually wana listen to 'em both, give the track an edge...makes then enjoy the track
Dope stuff man, glad the album is comin thru finally :b:

Mah man! Props for the feed cousin. :smoking:

classthe_king wrote:Dude, this is sick as fuck. You got my favorite style on TR. This new mixtape is going to be epic :worship:

I fucking love you no homo. :worship:

M-Pyre wrote:now thats dope !

dope beat! props on producing it! anyways, I'm loving that slow flow you roll on, gives the track a nice edge if you know what I mean. the beginning of your first verse really sts it off man, sounds like an intro or something. if it was intended then you did a perfect job man, props!

to bad there's no chorus cause you probably would have murked that to. mixing sounds about right and your flow was consistantly on point.

edit: ahh, I see your still planning on making a chorus, nice!

can't wait to hear more.

Thank you bro. Glad you liked my beat, coming from you it means a lot.

77o77 wrote:Im not gunna lie this is honestly dope as fuck. I really felt the beat for the most part and loved your flow through this whole song.
I cant wait to dwnload ur new tape. Hopefully i get good enough one day to hit up some serious shit wit chu. knowa im sayin.

I gotta give you major props for this shit bro. keep it real, and never change.

You know it playa! :worship:
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Re: Sajjad - The Darkest Motherfucker To Date

Postby Solace » Aug 25th, '10, 01:02

That was pretty dope broski :smoking:
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Re: Sajjad - The Darkest Motherfucker To Date

Postby Emadyville » Aug 25th, '10, 04:25

damn man, that shit was dope as hell. delivery, flow (except for minor shit like zu said), rhymes (some basic, but some multies, but diff vocab made it nice), concept, lyrics in general were great, and the beat was dope.

I can't really find shit wrong with it, loved the dragging out of words on this also, great shit man :y: :y:
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Re: Sajjad - The Darkest Motherfucker To Date

Postby mceddie » Aug 25th, '10, 04:44

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Re: Sajjad - The Darkest Motherfucker To Date

Postby B.A.D. » Aug 25th, '10, 06:25

classthe_king wrote:Dude, this is sick as fuck. You got my favorite style on TR. This new mixtape is going to be epic :worship:

:worship:

plus what the fuck ya talkin bout with that no lyrical feel... the lyrics are better than what 90% of this site can do, theyre hot my niqqa, they hot...

wonderfull piece man.... plus the flow :worship:

niqqa you should add a Nate Dogg type hook on that bitch.

either way, amazing song, and this, chamber's and tash's mixtape are going to take over the world soon :worship: :worship:

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Re: Sajjad - The Darkest Motherfucker To Date

Postby Tornado » Aug 25th, '10, 11:24

This reminds me of one of those Eminem sounding diss beat tracks. Beat is simple but that's the great thing about it, it's uncluttered and givs it a dark vibe. verses had a sick ass flow to it although i could hear some high pitced hissing, maybe a mixing issue. But dope unfinished shit
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Re: Sajjad - The Darkest Motherfucker To Date

Postby M15HKA » Aug 25th, '10, 12:44

:worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: & I don't do that much on feedbacks.

Seriously bro this is the type of shit i dig. Keep it up.

The beat is perfect too.
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Re: Sajjad - The Darkest Motherfucker To Date

Postby Robbie G » Aug 25th, '10, 15:02

Dope song man. Like I told you on MSN the beat is crazy, prefect for the dark feel your going for. If I have any criticism it's that I sometimes feel like you always use the same or similar flow. Just keep that in mind. :y:

Good shit bro, I'm pumped for the tape. :smoking:
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