Wishin' - TJB

[tjb]

hey feed me on this one.. last time i dropped something you folks said i should work on delivery..... well here it is..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ERn-Rv4Dpno

[tjb]

thanks man yeah i think i should probably throw a doller or two down for a new mic......... the rockband 2 mic, with sock as a spit cover isnt exactly cutting it anymore...

[B.A.D.]

the beat is pretti unique. I like it

you need to learn a couple tricks on cool edit/adobe audition... so u can get out the clarity at its 100%. a little advice hmm.. well, its too dry, change the reverb, need a noise reduction.. prolly add a gentle bass lift to your main acapella. if you need more detailed feed on mixing, don't hessitate to ask

your delivery is really good, the flow is almost impressive, the second I noticed a couple spots where you struggled to catch a breath, thats due to to the writing scheme of that verse, so try to simply the flow a little on the parts you feel they cause struggle. but that first verse was crazy, got me nodding my head to it.

the lyrics, I like em, pretti deep, easy to get through, perfect work.

a nice little track, and I'm looking forward to listen to more of your stuff, great potential.
congrats

[tjb]

the beat is pretti unique. I like it

you need to learn a couple tricks on cool edit/adobe audition... so u can get out the clarity at its 100%. a little advice hmm.. well, its too dry, change the reverb, need a noise reduction.. prolly add a gentle bass lift to your main acapella. if you need more detailed feed on mixing, don't hessitate to ask

your delivery is really good, the flow is almost impressive, the second I noticed a couple spots where you struggled to catch a breath, thats due to to the writing scheme of that verse, so try to simply the flow a little on the parts you feel they cause struggle. but that first verse was crazy, got me nodding my head to it.

the lyrics, I like em, pretti deep, easy to get through, perfect work.

a nice little track, and I'm looking forward to listen to more of your stuff, great potential.
congrats

Thanks alot

[Weather Man]

This is a sick ass track dude.