Strictt Ame .vs. Slic

[Slic]

Lmao this is text battling structure. You don't write it to a beat. Strictt's is a great median but you use a little audio flow and go on RapDogs, you're gonna get your ass beat. Even Grind Timers flow like how mine is written.

Just because you watched 8 Mile twenty seven times doesn't mean you can battle lmao.

[murphmanny]

alright lol
say what you say, you're probably right. i've battled, 3 times? i think

but i'm still saying the "raiders" line didn't rhyme. if that's "good" on your other forum, then i dunno what bad is... i'm JUST saying tho

carry on

[Slic]

I've only been rapping for two years so yeah it is hard for me to tell if two words rhyme. Dumb ass.

[murphmanny]

i never asked if it was hard for you to tell if they rhyme lol. i just said it doesn't rhyme to me

but whatever, i'm probably pronouncing it wrong...

[shadyfreakzul]

Slic watchout i'ma call you out

[Slic]

Slic watchout i'ma call you out

Alrighty bro, I'll watchout lol

[Enimee]

(3) Punchlines-stricct
(3) Personals-slic
(2) Multies-slic
(1) Flow-slic
(1) Structure-tie
(1) Vocab/Complex-slic
(1) Other-stricct for creativity

closer then the breakdown shows, good battle

[Strictt Ame]

Well since we require breakdowns here its 2-0 Slic, otherwise Id have a 3-0 KO by now..lmao

Oh well, nice verse Slic, I wasnt feelin the essay/sa line cuz Ive heard so many time before but the rest was nice..looks like you might get the upset here..props

[Sir_Machete']

Very good battle here fellaz, i'ma give a proper break down for this one....


BARS OF THE BATTLE:


Its time for this match-to-end, bring ya weapons & faggot-friends
They can all watch me wreck SL like I just crashed-a-Benz!!
..heard SL concepts before but this was real good for the name play..

I don’t need friend‘ship’, but Ill burn you the slot like a flanker-can
Yeh you beat the Weather, but you’ll get crushed by the Anchor-Man!!*
..NICE! If only you had like 2 more personal sting bars like these mam..

VS

I scanned for ya songs, you go lighter in the booth than a tanning salon...on that retard shit
Watch me end this (essay/SA) quicker than a Mexican gang member...or a smart kid
..concept heard before but the name play was crisp..

You're not shit, a cocky dick, I heard Ame fell in love with a bomb bitch
But she's bleeding him dry, his main SQUEEZE is my wife and that's how you CON-STRICTT
..Solid name play and fresh..

Blow a crater in this flowless player, gun rhymes are old and wack
If Steve's last name was Jobs he still couldn't push a key or hold a Mac
..name/word play was dope..

(3) Punchlines - TIE [Both came swinging]
(3) Personals- Slic
(2) Multies- Slick [good style how he changes it]
(1) Flow- Slic
(1) Structure- TIE
(1) Vocab/Complex- TIE
(1) Other- Slic [edges it with better name play]


Vote- Slic he had hard hitting personals and clever name play's, just solid almost each bar from his. DON'T LET THE CAT'S FOOL YOU it was very close. Strictt you came real good too man but some bars just wasn't hard enough for this one.

[Spyder]

lmao 2 slic taking my SA line

tisk tisk

[Strictt Ame]

Well Slic..props to you..honestly I think it wasnt a 0-3 KO..but hey you got a couple votes from people whose opinion I respect so thats all good with..

And why couldnt you first 3 voters break that shit down..lmao I wouldve been the one with the KO..hahaha oh well..good shit

[QzA]

Punches- Ehh...close....but imma say Strictt for consistency
Personals-Imma say SLIC.... Slic's verse contained more and I liked the Russel hit....I thought that was clean.
Word/name play -Tie......The personal and nameplay combo of the raiders line and then Strictt comming with his baseball line kinda decided this for me.
Meta/simz- Hands down...Strictt is much more up to par in this area. His scripts are clean.

Overall everything else is virtually tie...so my thoughts is that Strictt edges this battle out.I dont think Slic sucked .....its just he was soooo damm sloppy in the beggining and rushed a few concepts thru-out.Strictt is pretty good at staying consistant.

V-Strictt

[classthe_king]

Did you really just vote on a battle that ended on September 13th

[QzA]

What can I say.......it izz what it izz.....Hell this whole fuckin forum ended on the same date LOL!!!!

[classthe_king]

Touche