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Freestyle

Postby rap_gurl » Mar 9th, '06, 11:45

This one is diff to The Streets as I wrote this one as a rap.Tell me what ya think.

I am that one thing that the world calls a juvenile//
In the judges office I have my special very own file//
I'm a master of illusion moving just one pin causing confusion//
I stream together like X and Y chromosomes in one fusion//
in these technical exceptional essay's I skip the conclusion//
I just rather leave yall in awww of this optical-illusion//
I'm very deceptive with this brain mass as a weapon, >that causes my brain cells 2 form this logical- infusion//
I pass my blood from one rhyme 2 another like blood 2 page transfusion//
I explode like H-bomb devices during nuclear fusion//
I just dont roam around the hood I roam around the solar system//
I fuck up the tracks to ur intestines and digest ur digestive system//
Gandhi was an intellect but he was an off spring to wisdom//
I hold back from dropping another seed with one laytex condom//
it's unseldom for me not to spit brain-text bars at random//
these artistic statements come at the heat of boredom//
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Postby Inzanity » Mar 9th, '06, 13:27

nice rap I like how u didn't use any basic words it kept the rap more interesting keep em' comin'
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Postby rap_gurl » Mar 9th, '06, 13:43

thanx.
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Postby Mc Cubz » Mar 9th, '06, 16:45

yo got sum skills there:
"I'm a master of illusion moving just one pin causing confusion//"
illusion:moving an aliteration in causing confusion
nice 2 see wel dun
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Postby walend » Mar 9th, '06, 17:43

wow nice lyrics, i also wanna hear em audio....
Glenfiddich Single Malt Whisky
Eminem
Nirvana
VW Golf GTI
Painting & Paint
^^^^^^ Basically my intrests
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Postby rap_gurl » Mar 9th, '06, 22:46

maybe I will do an audio.
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