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Soulicide - Set My Heart On Fire (1st Single)

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Soulicide - Set My Heart On Fire (1st Single)

Postby TheWeirdoIsBack » Sep 29th, '10, 06:16

First official release from me coming around Halloween.. It's just a mixtape. It's called, "I Heard That Shit Before!", and all but one or two of the songs on the mix are songs I've redone. This is one I'm positive you will all recognize.

A note about the quality, I know it's not super terrific. I don't have a great mic, but it's good enough. I promise you, you'll be able to understand everything. Just know that it's not professionally recorded. But don't let that stop you from peeping this shit out.

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=NF26X10B

This is one of my favourite songs I've ever done. I have about ten songs recorded already, and three or four more to go. I hope y'all will take the time to check this out, and hopefully look forward to my tape. Any comments/critiques would be greatly appreciated guys.
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Re: Soulicide - Set My Heart On Fire (1st Single)

Postby B.A.D. » Sep 29th, '10, 07:40

hey, what up? Havent seen you around much. Megaupload wont work with safari :n: (neither zshare or soundclick) can u upload it to something like usershare.net or limelink??

also, if you want other peeps to feed, I strongly suggest you comment around on some tracks aswell :y:

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Re: Soulicide - Set My Heart On Fire (1st Single)

Postby TheWeirdoIsBack » Sep 29th, '10, 08:04

Yeah man, I been around, but it's been a minute since I stepped foot in this area. Glad to see you still post around though, I haven't heard from you in a while either. Here's a usershare link for ya homie, hopefully this one works. :y:

http://usershare.net/69fbz6ki0v9v

I'll be making my rounds to other people's shit in the morning, I'm outtie for the night. If anyone gets to this before I get to you, leave something you want some feedback for, I'll hit you back in the morning.
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Re: Soulicide - Set My Heart On Fire (1st Single)

Postby B.A.D. » Sep 29th, '10, 08:44

awh c'mon. Love The Way You Lie??? :angry: lol... there's too many of em. Plus I thought you made beats aswell

yeah u need a couple tips on here.
- you complicate yourself too much on your way of writing, too much going on and it makes you loose the flow. try a simpler and easier rhyme scheme. like a smaller and determined number of syllabels per line.
strangely enough try to flow an entire verse like you did the 'snap back to reality' part, after that the flow got a lot more natural and overall better.
- if you do take it seriously (even if its just a hobbie) you should definitively get a new mic. or at least a custom made pop filter and use a better mixing technique.
- the lyrics are ok, easy to understand the story and all. But might want to turn it up a notch, a little more lyrical u know??. yeah, overall a decent job. I'll be checking that mixtape :y:

keep at it man :y:

rtf if u can here: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=98304
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Re: Soulicide - Set My Heart On Fire (1st Single)

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 29th, '10, 12:50

yo...ill be just honest with you...
you lost the flow in many parts..cuz u complicate it too much like ax said...and err the quality u should be able to make it a lot better...do u use noise reduction??and err u should do ur own songs though..this was ehhh :y:
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Re: Soulicide - Set My Heart On Fire (1st Single)

Postby TheWeirdoIsBack » Sep 29th, '10, 22:04

Thanks for the feed guys, I really appreciate it.

@Ax, yeah I used to make beats, I got a new computer though and don't have the program anymore. A lot of those beats I made weren't that terrific anyway lol. For my actual album, I will have all original beats though, and I'm working on getting a better mic. I'm recording with some friends in the attic with a Rock Band mic, and we're pretty inexperienced with the program that we have, but we're learning! Thanks for checking it out though homie :flower:

@Tuneisian, thanks for checking out and giving it to me straight up, like I said, I'll be working on getting the quality right, and I'll try to cut my syllables a bit, thanks for the feed bro :y:
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Re: Soulicide - Set My Heart On Fire (1st Single)

Postby TheWeirdoIsBack » Oct 9th, '10, 07:56

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