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Re: I've Told Myself NEW D. Dubs

Postby TheWeirdoIsBack » Oct 6th, '10, 18:40

I'm loving the hook. The flow in the first verse was nice, and the lyrics were great, but what really got me was the second verse. The lyrics and rhymes were amazing, and the flow change was interesting. Great song overall, keep it up bro. :y: :y:
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Re: I've Told Myself NEW D. Dubs

Postby dR3 » Oct 6th, '10, 19:18

Damn, you never disappoint.

Pretty nice beat and an interesting hook. Love the verses, and I think your flow was on point. Also, the studio quality is really noticeable.

Keep it up bro, can't wait to hear the EP.
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Re: I've Told Myself NEW D. Dubs

Postby Emadyville » Oct 6th, '10, 20:45

TheWeirdoIsBack wrote:I'm loving the hook. The flow in the first verse was nice, and the lyrics were great, but what really got me was the second verse. The lyrics and rhymes were amazing, and the flow change was interesting. Great song overall, keep it up bro. :y: :y:


Thank you, I'm glad you liked the flow switch cause I was really trying to make that stand out :y:

dR3 wrote:Damn, you never disappoint.

Pretty nice beat and an interesting hook. Love the verses, and I think your flow was on point. Also, the studio quality is really noticeable.

Keep it up bro, can't wait to hear the EP.


thanks man :y:
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Re: I've Told Myself NEW D. Dubs

Postby classthe_king » Oct 6th, '10, 23:10

Dude, this is one of the best songs I've heard in here. The quality was amazing :worship: I loved the beat and the chorus, and the subject of the song, I can't find any faults tbh. I can't wait for the EP.
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Re: I've Told Myself NEW D. Dubs

Postby Xray » Oct 6th, '10, 23:34

I love your delivery. The flow is fucking ILL AS FUCK. You finally figured out how to work that flow. My god @ how well you wrote this shit dude. Simply amazing work. When you started spitting I was like "Shit, so this is how you sound with proper mixed vocals". Loved it tbh. 10/10. Downloading this shit for sure. You a crazy mafucker man. :y:
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Re: I've Told Myself NEW D. Dubs

Postby Emadyville » Oct 7th, '10, 03:34

Class and X-ray :happy:

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Re: I've Told Myself NEW D. Dubs

Postby B.A.D. » Oct 7th, '10, 03:48

Good beat man.

Quality :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: sounds studio quality. how the fuck u did that?

I love the flow man, really. Theres really nothing to feed on here, there's lyrics :worship: , the flow :worship: , the emotion & delivery :worship:

and verse 2 is one of the best verses I've heard from an underground rapper... damn it man.

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Re: I've Told Myself NEW D. Dubs

Postby Emadyville » Oct 7th, '10, 03:50

Big Ax-D wrote:Good beat man.

Quality :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: sounds studio quality. how the fuck u did that?

I love the flow man, really. Theres really nothing to feed on here, there's lyrics :worship: , the flow :worship: , the emotion & delivery :worship:

and verse 2 is one of the best verses I've heard from an underground rapper... damn it man.

awsomeness :worship: :worship: :worship:


I recorded this at an actual studio and had it mixed professionally, well I mean the guy uses protools and knows what he is doing I should say, and thanks for the feed man, shit means a lot :y:
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Re: I've Told Myself NEW D. Dubs

Postby B.A.D. » Oct 7th, '10, 03:53

Emadyville wrote:
Big Ax-D wrote:Good beat man.

Quality :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: sounds studio quality. how the fuck u did that?

I love the flow man, really. Theres really nothing to feed on here, there's lyrics :worship: , the flow :worship: , the emotion & delivery :worship:

and verse 2 is one of the best verses I've heard from an underground rapper... damn it man.

awsomeness :worship: :worship: :worship:


I recorded this at an actual studio and had it mixed professionally, well I mean the guy uses protools and knows what he is doing I should say, and thanks for the feed man, shit means a lot :y:


yeah, he definitively knows what he's doing. Pro Tools is not that hard to use; I mean the voice really depends on WHERE you record it, to be this clean. so yeah, it had to be actual studio.

but congrats on that man. Feels proud :y:
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Re: I've Told Myself NEW D. Dubs

Postby Emadyville » Oct 7th, '10, 03:55

^ thank you sir, appreciate that :happy:
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Re: I've Told Myself NEW D. Dubs

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Oct 8th, '10, 17:32

great :y:
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Re: I've Told Myself NEW D. Dubs

Postby Steve Spag » Oct 9th, '10, 01:42

Dude, I was really impressed when I heard this last night. The lyrics as usual were smooth and meaningful, your tracks are very easy to relate to which make them that much more enjoyable. Your flow is getting real nice too, I can't wait to do that track!

P.S., I'm droppin' that verse to this beat in a few mins, be sure to let me know what you think! Don't worry though, I'm not releasing it as an official song.
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Keep it up dude!
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Re: I've Told Myself NEW D. Dubs

Postby Tash8 » Oct 9th, '10, 02:49

k block wrote:Everything was on point except for your flow. Your flow was sloppy and all over the place.. But everything else was good, especially your emotion. The beat is amazing.


just cause he doesn't flow to the same beat every rhyme doesnt mean his flow is all over the place.

anyways, good track, studio quality really really fixes up ur delivery man..my issue is that i didn't hear overlays, which i think woulda made the track better
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Re: I've Told Myself NEW D. Dubs

Postby Mr. Chambers » Oct 9th, '10, 04:59

fuck.......people taking my classics. it's ok, i used my own hook lolololololol


i hated this fellow on the hook....but its whatever...lyrics were ok...a couple meh punchlines......1st verse was kinda average......flow was kinda sloppy....delivery is ok...but i feel you can put alil more of your passion into it.....2nd verse was better flow wise. had a unique flow. lyrics were better on this verse. delivery still feels a lil bland.

quality was crystal tho.... :y:
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Re: I've Told Myself NEW D. Dubs

Postby Emadyville » Oct 9th, '10, 05:39

Tash8 wrote:
k block wrote:Everything was on point except for your flow. Your flow was sloppy and all over the place.. But everything else was good, especially your emotion. The beat is amazing.


just cause he doesn't flow to the same beat every rhyme doesnt mean his flow is all over the place.

anyways, good track, studio quality really really fixes up ur delivery man..my issue is that i didn't hear overlays, which i think woulda made the track better


there were overlays, I think part of it might have to do with the quality, because its much clearer I guess they become harder to hear at a normal volume, but maybe not lol.

anyway thanks to everyone for the feed :y:
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