2 NEW Steve Spag Tracks!

[Steve Spag]

Both I shared lyrics for ahead of time because I wanted you to get a feel for what I was going for. After a long day at the studio, here's a little bit of what I've been up to:

1st Track; Wilderbeast
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_so ... ID=9734860
Steve Spag - Wilderbeast.mp3 - 3.46MB
http://www.myspace.com/stevespag

2nd Track; I've Told Myself (TR Exclusive)
Steve Spag - I_ve Told Myself.mp3 - 1.72MB

Link To Feedback; viewtopic.php?f=38&t=99410

Be sure to let me know what you think, ANY and ALL feedback is GREATLY appreciated!

[B.A.D.]

Wilderbeats.-
haha, the voice. I like it. The beat is great reminds of some Moby shit, but turned into hip hop, where did you got that shit from? very strange flow but it flows haha. But you did switched it a lot on the second verse thats a new thing, good job. Yeah, nice track The hook is the only thing I didnt enjoy as much, I thought it was too empty. oh a Sinima tag at the end. dont fuck with soundclick.

I've Told Myself.-
Jesus, how many tracks we will listen on this beat. lmao. dont worry about it, but thats the price you pay for fucking with soundclick haha. anyways, short verse, great flow again, lyrics are a bit not up to your standards, but its alrite, The Mixing, however, doesnt sound studio at all, so if you recorded this at your studio they ripped you off. seems extremely rushed to be of enjoyment. Either way its a cool short shong, I digs.

you did good on both, glad to finally see more music from ya. been a long time keep at it mr. S

[Steve Spag]

Haha, I didn't mind using these beats because I knew I wasn't gonna do anything serious with 'em. I'm glad you like them though bro. I respectfully disagree however about the recording for "I've Told You", I think the quality sounds pretty good. I can't really tell a difference between all the tracks I did today, they all sound pretty fresh down here...lol.

Thanks for checking brotha!

[Emadyville]

Wilderbeat-I'm gunna sound like a broken record, but you seem to always have the same delivery on your tracks. I feel like I can listen to songs content wise at both ends of the spectrum and you'll sound the same, this is the one major thing I think you really need to work on. For this content you sounded cocky, which is great for what you did with this, but with this beat and you're actual lyrics I felt an angry/cocky delivery was a lot more suitable.
The lyrics were good, I liked you're flow a lot on this, it was cool and fit your rhyme structure well. The quality was great, the ads worked, and the hook was good, except again for the delivery.

i've told Myself- while this is more difficult because I did a song to it, so there probably is some bias no matter how I try to listen this lol, just wanted to start with that. A big problem I found for this was just your voice didn't fit the beat, and I feel that its either your voice just would never sound good on this however you tried it, or it was again you're delivery. I loved the lyrics tho, the random feel to them I really liked.

Overall, man you have got to start changing up you're delivery, you just sound the same on everything I hear. Also, the flows usually seem to really give me the impression you use a basic flow on most verses. And I feel if you change the delivery, whether you use the same flow in 2 songs or 10, the diff delivery will make them each be different.

I know I sounded real harsh on this, but I know how dope lyrically you are, it took me awhile to realize how important deliveries were, and I'm not saying my delivery is perfect on every song, but it's something you really need to work on. Keep making music man

Edit: when i said basic flow before, I didn't mean the flow itself was necessarily basic, but that you use the same flow I guess sounds better

[Steve Spag]

^^
No man, I didn't take it harsh, it's just your opinion. I do my style that way because it's what I personally enjoy. Don't forget though, these are just 2 throw-away tracks, I stuck to my usual flows because it's what I like hearing. At the end of the day I gotta be satisfied myself with the product, and I'm doing it for me, not others, lol.

My albums I'm working on right now have such a dramatic flow change you're gonna go ape-shit, lol, this I promise. I've been working with some really dope, unique producers who got me on some whole other shit, haha! Hopefully things start running a lil' faster so I can get those projects out there.

[B.A.D.]

. I respectfully disagree however about the recording for "I've Told You", I think the quality sounds pretty good.

I didnt said it was bad... just not ass good as your other tracks.

[Steve Spag]

. I respectfully disagree however about the recording for "I've Told You", I think the quality sounds pretty good.

I didnt said it was bad... just not ass good as your other tracks.

Ahh, yeah I know that, haha. Thanks for the honesty man!

[Solace]

Already peeped these last night...I'm loving them!

[Emadyville]

^^
No man, I didn't take it harsh, it's just your opinion. I do my style that way because it's what I personally enjoy. Don't forget though, these are just 2 throw-away tracks, I stuck to my usual flows because it's what I like hearing. At the end of the day I gotta be satisfied myself with the product, and I'm doing it for me, not others, lol.

My albums I'm working on right now have such a dramatic flow change you're gonna go ape-shit, lol, this I promise. I've been working with some really dope, unique producers who got me on some whole other shit, haha! Hopefully things start running a lil' faster so I can get those projects out there.

Alright well I can't wait to hear that shit, and I understand you gotta do what you like, I didn't take into consideration that aspect. I'm sure the new shit will make me go ape-shit too, can't wait man

[Steve Spag]

^^
Wordd!

Keep the feed/listens coming please!

[Steve Spag]

1st Bump.
Funny how I get the most views but least comments, lol.

[B.A.D.]

1st Bump.
Funny how I get the most views but least comments, lol.

Well, I think chambers is slowly saving us from this. I'm always moaning about the same thing. lol. so I'll help you bump this up

hey, ironical enough. I'd like to know what you think of the track I posted. would mean a lot. You can pm me or tell me what u think on msn if you dont feel like posting

[Steve Spag]

1st Bump.
Funny how I get the most views but least comments, lol.

Well, I think chambers is slowly saving us from this. I'm always moaning about the same thing. lol. so I'll help you bump this up

hey, ironical enough. I'd like to know what you think of the track I posted. would mean a lot. You can pm me or tell me what u think on msn if you dont feel like posting

See, that's what I'm talking about. I hadn't noticed you released a new track because all the crap from the noobs gets pushed ahead of us which is why I thought it would be appropriate if us vets got the recognition we deserve, lol.

I'ma peep it right now and drop you some feed!

To everyone else, STOP SLEEPING ON THIS!

[Kez]

Wilderbeast:
Liking the beat, not what i expected but still great
I agree with Emady's point about your delivery sounding kinda similiar on most tracks, but considering it fits both tracks fine i see no real issue. Only issue would arise when you make like sad tracks. Lyrics were pretty alright, obviously it's just a brag song so no giant amount of analysis is needed, but they do the job well and i liked a lot of the imagery like the Matrix thing. The flow i liked on this track, very connected lol. Hook was alright, nothing really special to be fair.

Told Myself:
Haha, i've written a song to this beat too Aint been able to record it yet obviously
The flow i thought was great at the start but at times it kinda slipped a bit, i dunno maybe thats just me liking consistency in flow. The lyrics, pretty good, esp. the ending one lol. Delivery was great as usual, esp at the start, you have the kinda delivery that just makes me get into the song, very lively. Pretty good track, but i think you yourself know this aint completely polished.

Good tracks Steve, can't wait to hear a proper full one from you though

[Steve Spag]

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Haha, seems like everyone's writing to that "I've Told Myself" beat! Thanks for the feed man, your opinion is always taken into consideration as you're one of the few people on here I actually think knows something about music, lol.

The reason I havn't been releasing the full songs is because I've been keeping them saved for these projects I'm working on. Have no fear though, I talk about pretty much ever topic imaginable, so I can pretty much guarantee there will be something for everyone. I'll probably release another promotional track soon if I'm allowed.