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Chaos Exists

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 7th, '10, 06:49

http://www.zshare.net/audio/81221943378f7452/

Special thanx to mceddie for allowin me to use the beat! :worship:


My dreams consist of constant
intense combat offenses where chaos exists
and when i wake up i'm pissed
but i aint callin it quits
i can't be shaken up like this
some days i ball up my fists
yet, i won't stay throwin alcoholic fits
it's all just nonsense
cuz i always still wish my conscience was fixed
but i guess i'm too lost and sick
am i a hostage to my environment
have i lost my wits
is life goin too quick
i've drowned in an abyss
well, son of a bitch
how come i've got so drenched
bounded in violence
cuz now it's within my irises and i can't resist
i withdrawl my innocence
i'm powerless, downward spirallin
frown upon my cowardness my friends
don't allow me to become counterfeit
set a wild fire within
attempt to reallign my balance
i know i want it bad
it's hard to pretend
now i've gotta win my value back
that's the end of the argument
i'm wanderin a challengin track
but are you convinced
...you can count on me pack


http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=99227&p=1365180#p1365180
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Chaos Exists

Postby Tha Q » Oct 11th, '10, 21:21

mixing needs to be better...vocals aren't even blended into this beat...


flow sounds scattered and erratic


can tell you're reading


everything basically needs elevation



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Re: Chaos Exists

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 11th, '10, 21:23

true to everything you said, thanx for comments
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Re: Chaos Exists

Postby mceddie » Oct 12th, '10, 07:18

hey man, i like the flow and the lyrics alot, if you can send me just the acapella i can attempt to mix it for you!
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Re: Chaos Exists

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 12th, '10, 14:16

thanx and sounds good, maybe i will
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