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That's a Rap (Produced by Mart85)

Postby Emadyville » Oct 15th, '10, 04:27

http://drop.io/znwuayo/asset/that-s-a-rap-m4a

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Lyrics:

So I’m looking all around for a rival,
And on their arrival I’m liable to try and pull a rifle,
Dyin as the sight dull, and when I write,
Full pages an eyeful for ears I’m insightful,
And can’t idle I plan to stifle,
I rave and rant so I chance the title,
And it lands in a cycle fillin a life full of libel,
But the skills undeniable,
And the dullness you’re all the culprits,
Cause full clips not the only rhyme for bullshit,
See what I did there, it’s a conundrum,
It’s undone, but I come like a stun gun,
And run some but where did I come from?
Mart laid a beat and you’re done from one drum,
That’s a rap but my stories unsung,
In a world of nobody I’m already someone…

There is not much to say, but I will say this...I'm Back
And it's clear as day that I'm here to stay, o, by the way...I'm Back
So get used to me cause what I used to be, is the same and...I'm Back
And when I leave it'll all be the same so, that's a rap...that's a rap

Give me a minute cause I did it,
In it till I diminish or die trying to finish,
I defy limits a wise witness, that which is,
Multiplying rhymes until I divide business,
I don’t fly skittish anymore, I deny stiffness,
But my eye twitches,
After seein this sickness, so bye bitches,
And the truth lies in it,
Forgiveness is forged in it,
No more divots, the sport giveth,
The force in it and poor gimmicks are sure timid to pour,
What you mimic on the page in four images,
First a scrimmage, the seconds a citizen,
The third is the power that is given him dividends,
The finals limitless, and didn’t it just prove,
What he must do, and just to cuss you,
Better yet just move, as it can’t undo,
When it cuts through the trust you had but what’s new?

Hook

I can’t front, I trip and fall back,
Like right now, yeah it’s a gift and all that,
But the minimal claps from a digital track,
They have my cynical, an individual that’s,
At a moment so pivotal it’s critical in fact,
What is typical, is where the pinnacles at,
And it’s right here, it’s a ritual that,
Is habitual, it’s a cyclical act,
And its, just now so pitiful that,
As you drain the glass, I have to fill it all back,
But I, snatched a pen, I stole your thunder,
And I killed this, but the criminal acts,
Are not physical, it’s a not a literal track,
So I’m skippin all that as I flip it all back to the lies,
It’s a subliminal fact,
And don’t ask me again where the syllables at…

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Re: That's a Rap (Produced by Mart85)

Postby gutawafang » Oct 15th, '10, 04:37

Hey man. I swear to God, you fucking awesome man. I'ma keep my heads up man. Keep spamming facebook man cuz I'll be sure to check you out from now on. You're crazy sick man! :worship:
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Re: That's a Rap (Produced by Mart85)

Postby Emadyville » Oct 15th, '10, 04:40

gutawafang wrote:Hey man. I swear to God, you fucking awesome man. I'ma keep my heads up man. Keep spamming facebook man cuz I'll be sure to check you out from now on. You're crazy sick man! :worship:


Damn, thank you man means a lot, thanks for checking this :y:
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Re: That's a Rap (Produced by Mart85)

Postby Emadyville » Oct 16th, '10, 04:35

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Re: That's a Rap (Produced by Mart85)

Postby Tash8 » Oct 16th, '10, 19:19

haha i'm never asking u where the syllables at...haha wow..that rhyming was just incredible..truly was daren, seriously man. great job. This was a sick song to listen to and i'll probably listen to it again
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Re: That's a Rap (Produced by Mart85)

Postby Emadyville » Oct 16th, '10, 20:19

Tash8 wrote:haha i'm never asking u where the syllables at...haha wow..that rhyming was just incredible..truly was daren, seriously man. great job. This was a sick song to listen to and i'll probably listen to it again


haha yeah man, if you do I'm gunna AIM e-stab the fuckin shit outta you :flutter:

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Re: That's a Rap (Produced by Mart85)

Postby classthe_king » Oct 16th, '10, 20:59

That was sick dude, you've improved so much. Mart killed this beat and your flow was amazing, I can't wait for the tape :worship:
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Re: That's a Rap (Produced by Mart85)

Postby dR3 » Oct 17th, '10, 00:18

How is this even possible? Every track I've heard from you delivers to its fullest potential.
Flow and delivery were perfect, great vocab, and Mart did a great job on that beat.

Keep it up! :b:
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Re: That's a Rap (Produced by Mart85)

Postby Emadyville » Oct 17th, '10, 02:09

classthe_king wrote:That was sick dude, you've improved so much. Mart killed this beat and your flow was amazing, I can't wait for the tape :worship:


dR3 wrote:How is this even possible? Every track I've heard from you delivers to its fullest potential.
Flow and delivery were perfect, great vocab, and Mart did a great job on that beat.

Keep it up! :b:


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Re: That's a Rap (Produced by Mart85)

Postby ThomasJ » Oct 17th, '10, 10:06

My favorite rapper on TR.
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Been doing this for more than a quarter century, I'm just numb...
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Re: That's a Rap (Produced by Mart85)

Postby Kez » Oct 17th, '10, 19:30

Mart once again bringing the good beats

Your delivery is pretty clear and i like the chilled out kind of complacency it shows but i thought it coulda been more lively, i dunno. Still sounded pretty good though. I like how you deliver the rhymes too, how you like jump from multi to multi, lol that's a real bad description but it's hard to explain what i mean. Your delivery is very melodic (esp. on the multis) and it goes with the beat well, reminds me of Steve a lot. In the hook you can feel your presence but i kinda feel like the verses sort of lack a bit of presence, maybe it's just me though and you were trying to put across a more relaxed song, like "it doesn't even bother me", w.e lol

Lyrics were pretty good, the content does its job and there was a fair amount of lines in the song that i liked a lot, especially in the first verse. The multis were pretty on point too.

Your flow was pretty good, thought there were a couple parts where it sounded like you just kinda ran out of space and let the beat run for a second, but for the most part it rode the beat well, especially how some of the lines were timed to have the drum come after them.

Quality sounds fine to me.

The hook did its job, nothin particularly special.

A pretty good track, didn't sound neccessarily amateur like you tend to expect on here, nice work
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Re: That's a Rap (Produced by Mart85)

Postby Emadyville » Oct 18th, '10, 03:04

thanks for the feed kez, not sure what you meant by jump from multi to multi lol, but thanks again man :y:
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Re: That's a Rap (Produced by Mart85)

Postby Emadyville » Oct 18th, '10, 03:05

ThomasJ wrote:My favorite rapper on TR.


O shit missed this haha, thanks man, I'll take that as you liked the song :y:
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Re: That's a Rap (Produced by Mart85)

Postby Kez » Oct 18th, '10, 03:06

Emadyville wrote:thanks for the feed kez, not sure what you meant by jump from multi to multi lol, but thanks again man :y:


yeah lol it's hard to explain what i'm getting at in words so obviously i fucked it up :p
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Re: That's a Rap (Produced by Mart85)

Postby Emadyville » Oct 18th, '10, 03:17

Kez wrote:
Emadyville wrote:thanks for the feed kez, not sure what you meant by jump from multi to multi lol, but thanks again man :y:


yeah lol it's hard to explain what i'm getting at in words so obviously i fucked it up :p


It's cool, it obviously was a good thing so I'll take it for what it is. O and yeah the delivery on this was meant to be a real laid back track, something to kinda just play and chill to, so that'd what I went for with that :y:
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