2 NEW Steve Spag Tracks!

[SajN]

Wilderbeast:

I liked the beat, it had something special. You're being a lil too much cocky, aren't you
It was good, the lyrics are very good, and especially, since it has been so long time since I heard you or read your lyrics, I can tell you've improved Good shit... Not so fan of the voice in this track though. But the rest was good, I liked the hook as well.

I've Told Myself:

Lol, I can see why others are writing to it too. It's really good hook and beat. I like your voice in this one. The lyrics are good, but maybe not as good as your other stuff. Hmm, it's only one verse, I see. Anyway, it's good for being a short song. I think I liked this better

[Tash8]

straight up, i see watchu doing with the wilderbeast flow n all but it just ain't workin...it's kinda annoying actually.. second verse was much more fluent and easier to listen to.

and this is other track...uh douchebags doesn't rhyme with either line..ok track for what it was but it's incomplete

[Steve Spag]

^^
Thanks for the feed guys!
But douche bag does rhyme Tash, it's a slant rhyme.

[Tash8]

^^
Thanks for the feed guys!
But douche bag does rhyme Tash, it's a slant rhyme.

you didn't make it sound like it rhymed..that's all i'm saying

[Arabian Shady]

HAHA the beat reminds me of something BIG would spit on,lol
Aiyo you're delivery is pretty much awesome by now. I like how you control the beat.
The chorus is awesome. lol i shud tell you that the chorus does the lyrics jistification. That egotistic cocky shit goes well with the rest of the track. Like i can actually imagine myself in the corridor talkin to a dude and if he says something wierd i cock my head back and go "IM...DA SHIIIIIITT MAAAAAANN"
lmfao
Lyrics were well written, moderate complexity and still enjoyable...just how i like em.
I must say, excellent choice of beat
(Y)

[Steve Spag]

HAHA the beat reminds me of something BIG would spit on,lol
Aiyo you're delivery is pretty much awesome by now. I like how you control the beat.
The chorus is awesome. lol i shud tell you that the chorus does the lyrics jistification. That egotistic cocky shit goes well with the rest of the track. Like i can actually imagine myself in the corridor talkin to a dude and if he says something wierd i cock my head back and go "IM...DA SHIIIIIITT MAAAAAANN"
lmfao
Lyrics were well written, moderate complexity and still enjoyable...just how i like em.
I must say, excellent choice of beat
(Y)

Couldn't have asked for better feed, thanks brother!

You know EXACTLY what I'm doing.