Student of HipHop

[Joe M]

This is just a short piece I did. Still just starting out, so I'd love to get as much feedback as possible.

http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=9649121&q=hi&newref=1




Thanks for checkin it out




Fed:
http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=99720&start=45
http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=100098

[classthe_king]

Joe M
Glad to see you back, I remember you had some dope ass rhymes.


Alright, the lyrics were really good in this, you just need some better quality I think cause it's making your delivery sound weak. Flow was alright, nothing too special, keep working at it though man you got talent.

[Joe M]

ha ha glad someone remembered me

thanks for the feed Class, really appreciate it man.

[Mr. Chambers]

build up and beat were pretty intense...but you kind of disappointed....your flow was just all over the place....sounded rushed...your delivery was just...there...wasn't nothing special about it....lyrics were average.....just overall was a below average song....work on finding your delivery first...then worry about your flow....