Dealin with Myself- Vettori

[Vettori]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/82337595c696528b/

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"by Vettori on Thu Nov 04, 2010 3:39 pm (My Proof of Feedback)
haha the alarm was alright still, Short but sweet.. hmm, youve fixed up alot of the problems u used to have.. Sounds more professional.. these days...gotta say i havnt heard a spag song so good in a while.

the coast was chillin, get baked nd listen to that one haha... chambers is right though a few minor punches. gotta bring a heavier impact..cool shit man,, ill start checkin more of ur songs :P plus just got the internet back so i can really start feeding."
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This ones a change from the usually aggressive approach i take.
a very chill song...
Isn't professionally mixed, so qualities really out there atm...Currently saving up for a beats laptop + M-audio..so that problem won't be for long...

Warning. Lol
Sounds better in headphones. I repeat Sounds better in headphones.


when i played it loud..Some things were louder than they shoulda been... but overall i enjoyed making it. Just got the internet back the other day..so been really taking advantage of it...

lemme know if this would be worth Mastering..if done properly.

Lyrics

Verse 1

It's like its raining and your countin the drops.
Drinkin all of the fuckin time like A Fountains the Clock.
Wont apologize, for always lying You deny things, always Valued you but
Don't even realize what its like to always have to Drown in your thoughts
Over time The sound it adjusts. Not me , i aint down with it
Plus, everyday i Bus, downtown this fuckin mountain of sludge
Flush all the shit from up here down,all my surroundings are crushed
city produces clouds,years later found in our lungs
Always poundin the drums. a headache that will never quit,
Feel like thats it, twiddles round with his thumbs,
a moment to settle down, theres stuff i aint down to discuss
never wake up again, Die from allowing it once
But that wont ever be me, Force myself to get a Cd
Market it myself, Share with my friends cause i am Never greedy
Buy a House made out of glass, an open book to Let em see me
Do some shit that Opens eyes not afraid to Get extreme
These evil minds that seem alive are just Dead and breathing
wanna waste all your life than save up money get a tv
Lazy you get nothin love,Lets agree or
join the fuckin club
your worth less then me, Peace
i hope you never rest further in peace see
Youve been nothin but a burden to me e
I hope ur learnin, Learnin to see
Bark is so Heated, Feels like your burnin a tree
Don't ever come to me, not in the state of an Emergency
crippling facts, like a bree-eze that Sifts (sifts)right through the cracks,
is this fiction or fact, you better be-lieve it when its all over im bringin it back.
a repeat, My names king it's what i bring when i rap

(chorus)

theres plenty of differant fonts and letters, So nothin felt the same
always those Constant pressures, and someone elses pain.
cant wait to go back to dealin with myself again
Go back to dealin with myself , Man


Verse 2

Why Fuck with Something that Mimics a planet in size
My luck is like flipping a coin and it lands on its side
the only question now is Can it survive
You'll be a guest in my new text,if you can't Manage to hide
ill make you vanish goodbye
you are nothing more than a sandwhich to I
You'll be trapped the way amanda gets bined
hit him in the back of the neck and damage his spine
When you live and drive past just think man its a sign.
next time u crash you should plan it this time, dont just abandon ur ride and let it slam into me man remember dan is inside
random Panic and slide, Your eyes unveil a rock thats so big it's titanic in size
read the paper start Browsing the page
I wish i had a way to Regulate all these sudden mountains that raise.
Count as the days go By I hold alot inside, the goals not to Slide
Lose control,and one day let the rabbit out of his cage.

(chorus)

theres plenty of differant fonts and letters, So nothin felt the same
always those Constant pressures, and someone elses pain.
cant wait to go back to dealin with myself again
Go back to dealin with myself , Man

(partial verse)

Lift up my shirt, Stand on a balcony Frame
from here observe everything thats about to be Changed
Shout out my name, you will combust like i doutched you in flames
Give credit wear its due,J thanks for Helpin me Aim
A good friend of mine who's out in the game,
Most of the Rappers out now need help in they brain
fasten your belts Crashin helps,what else to Get yourself through the Pain
the moment we never met, i could tell you were strange

[lifeadeath]

Yo dude,

I was surprised positively, I really like these kind of songs, really simple beat and mellow from start to the end. Your voice and flow fits good to these type of tracks. One thing I was waiting is that the hook could be a bit more noticeable, it kinda drowns there somewhere but that's mostly the beats fault.

Overally, I'd say this is dope I'll drink to this

[Vettori]

Thanks alot man, yea im hoping to re-record this at J's

once i get into layers, my quality starts Slurrin.>.<

appreciate the comment man

Im still huntin for beats.. btw, ill be checkin yur site soon.

[Mr. Chambers]

this was clean...nothing much to say...but i think instead of having empty beat after the partial verse...just fade it out....and of course the quality...but other then those two thoughts...shit was dope.

[Vettori]

thank you. Yea i agree...I was planning on filling it in...but the beat at that point Changes ...when i remaster this...ill end it after the second chorus. thanks for checking.

[Le Tunisien]

hmm! i like this new thing u'r trying,soundin so calm,mellow i like it...the flow was awesome along the song,and all the multi's u used are just great u kept on the subject! the lyrics were great...
this song is dope overall!!

[Vettori]

Thank you man.. i appreciate it. as always. Glad you took time to check

[Xray]

The idea you had for this song wasn't bad, but very poor execution. Way too many layers, you sound robotic. Horrible mixing... Your breathing is all over the place. You could of easily shortened some of your lines to get better breaths. Flow was okay, you messed up more than 5 times I'd say. The beat is horrible. Garbage beat. The hook is horrible. This is an all rounder step back from your previous work. Lyrically this wasn't very good. Your wording seems emotional, but lost in some areas... Not much point in re-recording.

[Vettori]

thx, yea not to sound full of excuses but im sick, my breathings fucked haha.. youll tell the diff once im better. thanks tho lets me know, its not for everyone.

and to everyone for the record...No Punchins i worked on that

i used no effects just the Compression, and Graphic eq
1 main verse
1 layer for left speaker, 1 layer for right..thats it..my qualitys just not great

The mixing is horrible..lol.. but the idea of what i wanted is clear i think. Thx for checking.

[Emadyville]

I always liked your shit, but I fuckin loved this. voice sounded dope, saw you said your sick haha so idk if that'll change that much but sounded sick on here. Loved the flow, a few places I'd take out a word or two to make it better cause the speed of some parts to catch up or fit it in made those one or two words get jumbled and not understandable. Loved the content a lot, that's what really stood out. Delivery was very fitting, you did that very well. The hook was good too. Overall just the quality brought it down, but even that wasn't so bad as to make me not wanna listen, can't wait to hear this shit when you redo it, good drop man

[Vettori]

Thanks alot, Im glad that you liked it..yea im gonna be gettin a laptop shortly, with a good soundcard. problem should be solved shortly.

in the meantime i felt like gettin a few blueprints complete...so i can get better with them.

[Solace]

I hated the mixing! But aside from that, this is amazing. I love your rhyme schemes, very well done and bring you a polished flow. I really like it overall. The hook was well done.

You'll be trapped the way amanda gets bined

Ruined the second verse tbh those, it was going sooo well what happened lol.

Overall a really good track, 'cept the mixing. Keep at it Vet!

[Vettori]

hah i had a feelin it sounded wierd.. Sall good haha on the remastered version ill see what i can do about the sandwhich and amanda Lines...Lol

[Steve Spag]

Sounds pretty hot for the most part dude, it's always a pleasure listening to your tracks because you actually know how to flow, lol. I think your delivery was pretty great although at some points it felt like you were bored or something, maybe that was what you were going for by the tone of the song? Lyrics are dope, very deep and easy to relate to so I can't complain about that.

Overall it's a pretty tight track man although I can't help but still hear that Eminem influence. I'd really love to hear you switch it up sometimes because you have crazy potential. Keep it up brosef, you're one talented dude!

[Wallace]

As the first song I heard from you ("A lot to learn" with Tash, I keep this until today) I can see that you still didn't got skill to make a good chorus.

But everything is alright when it comes to other points. Flow, lyrics, and rhymes sounded good and well-done. You could just give more energy at the delivery, it really sounded like you were bored.