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Postby makaveli20 » Nov 12th, '10, 03:01

the way he was rapping on that song was incredbile.
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Re: is eminem verses on renegade em's greatest rhyme scheme

Postby EminemInsider » Nov 13th, '10, 01:10

Lose Yourself is his most complex rhyming ever.
Canning: What will it say on your tombstone?
Charlie Sheen: Something dot com.

Canibus & Eminem Converse: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rWB62t2_wJE
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Re: is eminem verses on renegade em's greatest rhyme scheme

Postby makaveli20 » Nov 13th, '10, 01:55

EminemInsider wrote:Lose Yourself is his most complex rhyming ever.

explain
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Re: is eminem verses on renegade em's greatest rhyme scheme

Postby Fleka » Nov 13th, '10, 13:09

The Way I Am seems to get forgotten allot.
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Re: is eminem verses on renegade em's greatest rhyme scheme

Postby classthe_king » Nov 13th, '10, 16:23

We already had a thread basically about this lol.

Rock Bottom.
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Re: is eminem verses on renegade em's greatest rhyme scheme

Postby WakeUpShow » Nov 13th, '10, 22:15

i agree with OP
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Re: is eminem verses on renegade em's greatest rhyme scheme

Postby Innovation » Nov 13th, '10, 23:18

I'm not sure about greatest ever, but Rock Bottom is one of the best you'll ever see.

I feel like I'm walking a tight rope, without a circus net
I'm popping percocets, I'm a nervous wreck
I deserve respect; but I work a sweat for this worthless check
Bout to burst this tech, at somebody to reverse this debt
Minimum wage got my adrenaline caged
Full of venom and rage
Especially when I'm engaged
And my daughter's down to her last diaper
That's got my ass hyper
I pray that god answers, maybe I'll ask nicer
Watching ballers while they flossing in their pathfinders
These overnight stars becoming autograph signers
We all long to blow up and leave the past behind us
Along with the small fry's and average half pinters
While player haters turn bitch like they have vaginas
Cause we see them dollar signs and let the cash blind us
Money will brainwash you and leave your ass mindless
Snakes slither in the grass spineless

Here's a challenge for you, highlight all of the multis. You'll realise just how good this verse is.

SWA has nothing on this.
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Re: is eminem verses on renegade em's greatest rhyme scheme

Postby Elision » Nov 14th, '10, 04:44

Stay Wide Awake.
i'm comin in, drivin my short bus
with this nose i don't need a torch up
bustin through, light the industry's porsche up
comin after who didn't support us...
imma change your brain bring
every wicked bit of strange to mainstream
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Re: is eminem verses on renegade em's greatest rhyme scheme

Postby classthe_king » Nov 14th, '10, 06:53

Nollie wrote:Stay Wide Awake is garbage
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Re: is eminem verses on renegade em's greatest rhyme scheme

Postby Slim's Shady » Nov 14th, '10, 08:20

Innovation wrote:I'm not sure about greatest ever, but Rock Bottom is one of the best you'll ever see.

I feel like I'm walking a tight rope, without a circus net
I'm popping percocets, I'm a nervous wreck
I deserve respect; but I work a sweat for this worthless check
Bout to burst this tech, at somebody to reverse this debt
Minimum wage got my adrenaline caged
Full of venom and rage
Especially when I'm engaged
And my daughter's down to her last diaper
That's got my ass hyper
I pray that god answers, maybe I'll ask nicer
Watching ballers while they flossing in their pathfinders
These overnight stars becoming autograph signers
We all long to blow up and leave the past behind us
Along with the small fry's and average half pinters
While player haters turn bitch like they have vaginas
Cause we see them dollar signs and let the cash blind us
Money will brainwash you and leave your ass mindless
Snakes slither in the grass spineless

Here's a challenge for you, highlight all of the multis. You'll realise just how good this verse is.

SWA has nothing on this.

SWA has a lot on that lmao.
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Re: is eminem verses on renegade em's greatest rhyme scheme

Postby MikeNUFC » Nov 14th, '10, 17:08

Slim's Shady wrote:
Innovation wrote:I'm not sure about greatest ever, but Rock Bottom is one of the best you'll ever see.

I feel like I'm walking a tight rope, without a circus net
I'm popping percocets, I'm a nervous wreck
I deserve respect; but I work a sweat for this worthless check
Bout to burst this tech, at somebody to reverse this debt
Minimum wage got my adrenaline caged
Full of venom and rage
Especially when I'm engaged
And my daughter's down to her last diaper
That's got my ass hyper
I pray that god answers, maybe I'll ask nicer
Watching ballers while they flossing in their pathfinders
These overnight stars becoming autograph signers
We all long to blow up and leave the past behind us
Along with the small fry's and average half pinters
While player haters turn bitch like they have vaginas
Cause we see them dollar signs and let the cash blind us
Money will brainwash you and leave your ass mindless
Snakes slither in the grass spineless

Here's a challenge for you, highlight all of the multis. You'll realise just how good this verse is.

SWA has nothing on this.

SWA has a lot on that lmao.

As much as I like SWA, it has absolutely fuck all on that Rock Bottom verse.

On SWA, he based the song soley on the multies and in turn loses some of his storytelling skills and adds some forced rhyming and lines.

Rock Bottom is written so incredibly that you could imagine the rhymes happened by accident because the vocabulary is so perfect. He's rhyming consistent 4 syllable multies without it sounded forced or the emotion being lost.

The fact people think SWA is better than this makes me feel quite sick.
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Re: is eminem verses on renegade em's greatest rhyme scheme

Postby classthe_king » Nov 14th, '10, 17:10

SWA is so overrated. He just rhymes a lot but the actually rhyming is horrible. Everyone always nuts thereself over the second verse but the second verse is awful. Spyder did a verse with that rhyme scheme once and Solace did it too, much MUCH better then Eminem's verse.
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Re: is eminem verses on renegade em's greatest rhyme scheme

Postby Slim's Shady » Nov 14th, '10, 19:19

MikeNUFC wrote:
Slim's Shady wrote:
Innovation wrote:I'm not sure about greatest ever, but Rock Bottom is one of the best you'll ever see.

I feel like I'm walking a tight rope, without a circus net
I'm popping percocets, I'm a nervous wreck
I deserve respect; but I work a sweat for this worthless check
Bout to burst this tech, at somebody to reverse this debt
Minimum wage got my adrenaline caged
Full of venom and rage
Especially when I'm engaged
And my daughter's down to her last diaper
That's got my ass hyper
I pray that god answers, maybe I'll ask nicer
Watching ballers while they flossing in their pathfinders
These overnight stars becoming autograph signers
We all long to blow up and leave the past behind us
Along with the small fry's and average half pinters
While player haters turn bitch like they have vaginas
Cause we see them dollar signs and let the cash blind us
Money will brainwash you and leave your ass mindless
Snakes slither in the grass spineless

Here's a challenge for you, highlight all of the multis. You'll realise just how good this verse is.

SWA has nothing on this.

SWA has a lot on that lmao.

As much as I like SWA, it has absolutely fuck all on that Rock Bottom verse.

On SWA, he based the song soley on the multies and in turn loses some of his storytelling skills and adds some forced rhyming and lines.

Rock Bottom is written so incredibly that you could imagine the rhymes happened by accident because the vocabulary is so perfect. He's rhyming consistent 4 syllable multies without it sounded forced or the emotion being lost.

The fact people think SWA is better than this makes me feel quite sick.

Well of course Rock Bottom is the better song but rhyme-wise it's CLOSE to SWA but not quite past it. Song-wise Rock Bottom is better and preffered for me, never said it wasn't.
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Re: is eminem verses on renegade em's greatest rhyme scheme

Postby Innovation » Nov 15th, '10, 00:36

@Slim's Shady

I feel like I'm walking a tight rope, without a circus net
I'm popping percocets, I'm a nervous wreck
I deserve respect; but I work a sweat for this worthless check
Bout to burst this tech, at somebody to reverse this debt


Nothing on SWA tops that. Think otherwise? Please do share. Those four lines are incredible. He has four syllable internal rhyming going on there.
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Re: is eminem verses on renegade em's greatest rhyme scheme

Postby Slim's Shady » Nov 15th, '10, 00:42

Innovation wrote:@Slim's Shady

I feel like I'm walking a tight rope, without a circus net
I'm popping percocets, I'm a nervous wreck
I deserve respect; but I work a sweat for this worthless check
Bout to burst this tech, at somebody to reverse this debt


Nothing on SWA tops that. Think otherwise? Please do share. Those four lines are incredible. He has four syllable internal rhyming going on there.

So blatantly but silently cause I know that she's sound asleep,
Who's waking me so violently and why is he on top of me,
He's raping me she trys to scream somebody please get him off me,
He's taping me, he's biting me he's laughing like it's funny,
She's scraping me she's fighting me she's scratching like some dumb freak,
Escaping me no dice ya see I might just be Ted Bundy
Or satan gee what a sight to see I'm dancing in my red panties,
I'm crazy but it's alright with me, man life can be so empty,
Stay away from me cause I'm dancing to quite a different drum beat,

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