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Re: Keeping It Real - Steven Ft Sentus and BILI.

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Nov 9th, '10, 20:24

YOU all held your own,the paul blart punch by sentus was crazy as fuck,bili was dope,never knew the lil nikka could write,REAL DOPE pucnhes and puns u got there,and steven my nigga u did real good too. :coffee:
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Re: Keeping It Real - Steven Ft Sentus and BILI.

Postby classthe_king » Nov 9th, '10, 20:34

Motherfucker ._.

I changed my verse and that's why I pm'd you guys asking to let me post it when Bili was done :shakehead:
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Re: Keeping It Real - Steven Ft Sentus and BILI.

Postby TommiTMX » Nov 9th, '10, 20:51

That Paul Blart punch was awesome!
:y: :happy: thanks for the read!
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Re: Keeping It Real - Steven Ft Sentus and BILI.

Postby BILI » Nov 9th, '10, 21:30

classthe_king wrote:Motherfucker ._.

I changed my verse and that's why I pm'd you guys asking to let me post it when Bili was done :shakehead:

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PS:Thx for the feed guys :y:
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Re: Keeping It Real - Steven Ft Sentus and BILI.

Postby classthe_king » Nov 10th, '10, 20:38

We murked this
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Re: Keeping It Real - Steven Ft Sentus and BILI.

Postby remy3x » Nov 10th, '10, 21:47

Really good guys, Sentus was my favorite.
BILI, you should put space after punctuation marks, so it's easier to read.
And... am I the only one who had to google Paul Blart?
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Re: Keeping It Real - Steven Ft Sentus and BILI.

Postby classthe_king » Nov 10th, '10, 22:36

remy3x wrote:Really good guys, Sentus was my favorite.
BILI, you should put space after punctuation marks, so it's easier to read.
And... am I the only one who had to google Paul Blart?


I'm more surprised you knew who Al-Shoaibi and Tzipi Levine were but now Paul Blart lol
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Re: Keeping It Real - Steven Ft Sentus and BILI.

Postby remy3x » Nov 10th, '10, 22:40

classthe_king wrote:
remy3x wrote:Really good guys, Sentus was my favorite.
BILI, you should put space after punctuation marks, so it's easier to read.
And... am I the only one who had to google Paul Blart?


I'm more surprised you knew who Al-Shoaibi and Tzipi Levine were but now Paul Blart lol

Haha, I googled them too. But others commented on Paul Blart, so I was like: "Who's that? What did I miss?"
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Re: Keeping It Real - Steven Ft Sentus and BILI.

Postby classthe_king » Nov 10th, '10, 22:44

remy3x wrote:
classthe_king wrote:
remy3x wrote:Really good guys, Sentus was my favorite.
BILI, you should put space after punctuation marks, so it's easier to read.
And... am I the only one who had to google Paul Blart?


I'm more surprised you knew who Al-Shoaibi and Tzipi Levine were but now Paul Blart lol

Haha, I googled them too. But others commented on Paul Blart, so I was like: "Who's that? What did I miss?"


Haha well if I taught you something new then my job was done :flutter:
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Re: Keeping It Real - Steven Ft Sentus and BILI.

Postby BILI » Nov 12th, '10, 01:29

classthe_king wrote:We murked this

Indeed

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Re: Keeping It Real - Steven Ft Sentus and BILI.

Postby classthe_king » Nov 12th, '10, 01:41

I just realized he never left feed
http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=101917&p=1402259#p1402259
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Re: Keeping It Real - Steven Ft Sentus and BILI.

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 15th, '10, 03:25

YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO glad to see people still droppin lol Steven everytime I see your writtens I hear it flowed in Possessed's voice :laughing: Buit it's dope man your shit is comin together. Sentus always dope your structured, crisp flow is a great breath of air. Its great to flow as always man lyrically dope as always. BILI my long-lost homeboy wats up man. It was cool man, your multis werent on the best point but it flowed good. All in all glad to see cats still bringin it :y:
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Re: Keeping It Real - Steven Ft Sentus and BILI.

Postby Slim's Shady » Nov 15th, '10, 23:53

Everyone did good, no weak links on this collabo :y:

I loved the raw heart/maul cops/Paul Blart rhymes and I loved the play on maul/mall. Rhyme-wise Sentus did the best. BILI you should def. put a space after the comma so I can comprehend the verses better. Steven's first 2 bars flowed perfect for me.

A good collabo all in all. 8/10 :y:
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Re: Keeping It Real - Steven Ft Sentus and BILI.

Postby BILI » Nov 17th, '10, 16:10

thx you two :y:
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Re: Keeping It Real - Steven Ft Sentus and BILI.

Postby Sir_Machete' » Nov 17th, '10, 23:44

lmao what the heck ya feeding?? send me a link, ya doing some ghost shit or what lol
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