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Real Life #leftover

Postby BILI » Nov 24th, '10, 13:39

This was for my collab wit Toxic but she aint responding so here`s my part


Steve, a lil boy, only ten years old
Mother died, then tears fall
Can he survive on his own? In his zone
Steve thinks he`s alone, sadly he is alone
Wondering will bad streets eat him up
Wondering will mad Pete beat him up
Couldnt pay the money back, so he got into drugs
Was fucked up, only knew how to do shrugs
It was Christmas, Steve was jealous of all the happy families
He wasnt able to stop thinkin about those crappy fantasies
"Mommy and daddy are back", thats all Steve needs
Sadly he can only watch how Christmas Eve leaves
But only bad people were around him, they only mocked him
Then Peter found him, that phony knocked him
Was crawling back home to get his mothers old warmer
But then Steve died all alone on a cold corner


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Re: Real Life #leftover

Postby DƎRDYPK » Nov 24th, '10, 13:58

i like it :y:
I could imagine Lil B rapping this lol
good drop though
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Re: Real Life #leftover

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 24th, '10, 14:10

deep man....i really liked it, lyrics were simple enough but complex but not over complex....good drop, BILI
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Re: Real Life #leftover

Postby Enimee » Nov 24th, '10, 16:38

sturdy drop bro im a fan of ur stuff usually anyways, and i wasnt dissapointed real strong drop man good shit :y: :y:
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Re: Real Life #leftover

Postby BILI » Nov 24th, '10, 18:41

DƎRDYPK wrote:i like it :y:
I could imagine Lil B rapping this lol
good drop though
stay based homie
#swag

word PK
Fa-Q wrote:deep man....i really liked it, lyrics were simple enough but complex but not over complex....good drop, BILI

Thx Fa-Q :y:
Enimee wrote:sturdy drop bro im a fan of ur stuff usually anyways, and i wasnt dissapointed real strong drop man good shit :y: :y:

:worship: :worship:

Thx alot homie
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Re: Real Life #leftover

Postby BILI » Nov 25th, '10, 10:44

bump :coffee:
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Re: Real Life #leftover

Postby Sam. » Nov 25th, '10, 10:48

My feed might seem irrelevant but ur verse reminded me of "2pac-brendas" got a baby,sort of,if u get wat i am tryin to say here.
[Rollefsen] - SajN retired, bitch got old, unlike Sams "ladies".
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Re: Real Life #leftover

Postby BILI » Nov 25th, '10, 10:55

eminematherstan wrote:My feed might seem irrelevant but ur verse reminded me of "2pac-brendas" got a baby,sort of,if u get wat i am tryin to say here.

feel you :y: yeah, it does sounds something like it, but it was actually inspired by this:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=edtj7cljOR0
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Re: Real Life #leftover

Postby Sam. » Nov 25th, '10, 11:02

BILI wrote:This was for my collab wit Toxic but she aint responding so here`s my part


Steve, a lil boy, only ten years old
Mother died, then tears fall
Can he survive on his own? In his zone
Steve thinks he`s alone, sadly he is alone

Wondering will bad streets eat him up
Wondering will mad Pete beat him up
Couldnt pay the money back, so he got into drugs
Was fucked up, only knew how to do shrugs
It was Christmas, Steve was jealous of all the happy families
He wasnt able to stop thinkin about those crappy fantasies
"Mommy and daddy are back", thats all Steve needs
Sadly he can only watch how Christmas Eve leaves

But only bad people were around him, they only mocked him
Then Peter found him, that phony knocked him
Was crawling back home to get his mothers old warmer
But then Steve died all alone on a cold corner


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Re: Real Life #leftover

Postby BILI » Nov 25th, '10, 22:36

Oh...ok :y:
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Re: Real Life #leftover

Postby BILI » Nov 26th, '10, 15:58

bump :smoking:
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Re: Real Life #leftover

Postby BILI » Nov 26th, '10, 16:50

Lello18 wrote:the song is amazing, i love the creativity, very good flow and the rhyming was awesome
but one thing disturbed me or confused me actually not disturbed, is the choice of the name Steve :unsure:

thx alot man

Its me showing respect towards Steven :'(
And I always loved Steve Irwin
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Re: Real Life #leftover

Postby toxicbuffy » Dec 13th, '10, 20:49

BILI Im so sorry my pms were messed up...im writing my verse today !!! :y: :y:
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Re: Real Life #leftover

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 13th, '10, 21:38

great writing of such a story!!!! i'm impressed with how simple the lyrics were, yet very effective!
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Real Life #leftover

Postby toxicbuffy » Dec 13th, '10, 21:39

My part

Shout Out To EminemBase For Correcting My Spelling For me, and to bili for wanting to colob :)

Malinda was never the girl who talked
Because all the other kids would mock
Calling her names and bringing her down
In all of her pain, she would drown

See, life was not better nor was it easier at home
Her daddy was broke,could not even afford a phone
Her dad would drink and snort drugs late at night
Then go into Malindas bedroom, and grab her arm tight

He would whisper in her ear softly not to scream
Melinda hoping and praying,it was all just a dream
Because the life she was living was just way to extreme
Her dad took away her innocence but also her self-esteem

She would pray to God every night for him to save her
Maybe become an angel, just like her beautiful Mother
PLEASE GOD, I need you right now, where are you?
I can't take this anymore, let me be the one you rescue

Feeling sad and helpless she took her Daddy's gun,
She had no other choice, she could no longer run,
July 17th Melinda Mathers ended her sad life
The kids and her dad should of thought twice

Now she is in heaven, a place no longer filled with pain
She no longer feels helpless, no longer feels she is insane
She is dancing with her Mother and talking with the lord
Where she can be free and happy, and no longer ignored
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