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Re: Anti-Brain Damage

Postby gutawafang » Nov 29th, '10, 03:40

Loving the mutlis. Flow is here and there, on and off. But the visualization is pretty good man. :worship: And funny as hell too! :laughing:
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Re: Anti-Brain Damage

Postby Audi » Nov 29th, '10, 04:42

I felt like I had to stretch a word or two to keep the flow near the beginning but damn that's just nit picking. It sounding like you told a story and it just happened to rhyme. Perfect multies. Loved it. Great homage to Em.

Amadeo wrote:Well, I asked your son to do my math quiz
But he's so dumb, he dunno what a graph is

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Re: Anti-Brain Damage

Postby Xray » Nov 29th, '10, 13:51

Some really funny lines in there. :laughing:

"Leave me alone!" Gimme your lunch ya fag
Or I'll use your fat face as a punchin' bag

I lol'd.

Good shit man. I'll peep your next drop. ;)
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Re: Anti-Brain Damage

Postby MikeNUFC » Nov 29th, '10, 17:11

Haha that was really good. As with Guta I kinda lost the flow at times but the rhymes seemed pretty effortless which is good.

This line:

His mother had a fucking hideous appearance
They approached me, I was in the clearance


felt really awkward though, probably cus the syllables didnt match up.

Overall, though it was really impressive.
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Re: Anti-Brain Damage

Postby DƎRDYPK » Nov 30th, '10, 01:53

that was incredible :worship:
you got serious skills lol

you should start ghostwriting for Eminem...he could use this shit :shifty: :b:
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Re: Anti-Brain Damage

Postby VenomBlackViper » Mar 18th, '11, 04:52

:laughing: :laughing: :laughing:
Dude that was fucking great, seems just like some shit Em would have wrote. As Derdy said you got serious skill. You should record this over the Brain Damage beat.
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Re: Anti-Brain Damage

Postby ArsheyHaq » Mar 19th, '11, 03:24

Damnn :o this definitely reminded me of some Slim Shady LP type shit..just awesome :y: you're, hands down, my favorite post-er in the CW section..

Although, I do agree with everyone about the whole "clearance" rhyme. It seemed unneeded, and you're better than that to have a filler-rhyme like that in your rap.

And I see what you did there with the whole Anti-'Brain Damage' thing haha nice homage.
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