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Run This Town feat. mcZu

Postby WakeUpShow » Dec 7th, '10, 01:01

http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=103606


Instrumental: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nXQV_Ii7g1I

[Cosh]
I'm music, and a cannibal, I eight 16's
I might kill myself just to show you'd miss me
Doing things big, I'm gonna throw boulders at your glass house
Stick your head in the ground and get ostracized like a cast out.
I'm past hot, like the firetruck kept going
Taking all your turf, like I kept mowing
Gonna expose your phoniness like I pantsed your cell
and then wash my hands of you like passed purell
Amassed knowledge after I harassed a dell
Dr. Cosh, here to Cure boredom with my sickness
And leave you studdering after it like a shy witness
I can guage your skill from a mile away
Arrest you for speeding through child's play
Make the crowd Hush when the BIC speaks
Paul Bunyan on the mic to you pip squeaks

[mcZu]
I stay with the same wit Nas had in Illmatic’s premises
Even if they joined Jenna Six they couldn't beat me, I’m demanding this
Nemesis to defend his resentment of this genius assessment
Of the craft I posses it’s, obvious, ‘cause zero is your worth
Put a thesaurus on your spine to see if you can back up your words
It’s impossible to stop this pure dopeness, I’m a hash brick
Back to school, got infected pupils, I’m clas-sic
My eyes red, I hacked this fore ‘em like an attack on discussion boards
I’m discussing wars with myself, and it is only benefits
I’m back with the tactfulness of a tactical pessimist
Glass half empty, I always want more, I leave dentals stiff
If you try to bite me, I do it for the people like an activist
I enjoy abusing these fake emcees like a masochist
I’m attacking this beat, it’s ‘bout to turn into a disaster, yes
And I’ll disrespect you even after you’re dead, like Funkmaster Flex
Now drop a bomb on it..
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Re: Run This Town feat. mcZu

Postby Enimee » Dec 8th, '10, 15:53

put a theasaurus on ur spine see if u can back up ur words????? like whoa lol

shit was hot for sure,
cosh i thought u coulda used a little more vocab and what not to spice up ur drop a lil it just didnt seem like u were goin 100 percent on this one

zu, that shit was hard i liked most every bar even though u only had a few hard hitters in there, and the wordplay was dope as fuck it jus seemed a lil irrelevent in some places i.e


It’s impossible to stop this pure dopeness, I’m a hash brick
Back to school, got infected pupils, I’m clas-sic



dope line man it just had nothing to do with anything u know what i mean? idk shit was hard as fuck either way good drop both of u well done
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Re: Run This Town feat. mcZu

Postby WakeUpShow » Dec 8th, '10, 17:56

Enimee wrote:put a theasaurus on ur spine see if u can back up ur words????? like whoa lol

shit was hot for sure,
cosh i thought u coulda used a little more vocab and what not to spice up ur drop a lil it just didnt seem like u were goin 100 percent on this one

zu, that shit was hard i liked most every bar even though u only had a few hard hitters in there, and the wordplay was dope as fuck it jus seemed a lil irrelevent in some places i.e


It’s impossible to stop this pure dopeness, I’m a hash brick
Back to school, got infected pupils, I’m clas-sic



dope line man it just had nothing to do with anything u know what i mean? idk shit was hard as fuck either way good drop both of u well done

thanks alot for the feedback man
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Re: Run This Town feat. mcZu

Postby mcZu » Dec 8th, '10, 20:03

Thanks for the feed, bruh.

CoSh, your verse aint bad, man. Agree with Enimee on the vocab part, you just gotta write more and more.
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Re: Run This Town feat. mcZu

Postby WakeUpShow » Dec 8th, '10, 20:36

mcZu wrote:Thanks for the feed, bruh.

CoSh, your verse aint bad, man. Agree with Enimee on the vocab part, you just gotta write more and more.

thanks zu, I'm def gonna keep writing.
and for the record, your wordplay is so nasty. Really great verse.
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Re: Run This Town feat. mcZu

Postby WakeUpShow » Dec 9th, '10, 12:52

Lello18 wrote:
It’s impossible to stop this pure dopeness, I’m a hash brick
Back to school, got infected pupils, I’m clas-sic


wow agreed this is one sick line!!!

Zu u had an amazing verse, Cosh u were very very good too, I won't complain bout ur vocab it's sure as hell 100x times better than mine

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thanks alot man :y:
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Re: Run This Town feat. mcZu

Postby WakeUpShow » Dec 10th, '10, 20:59

big ass bump
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Re: Run This Town feat. mcZu

Postby WakeUpShow » Jan 4th, '11, 21:17

bump. i know it's been a while, but mosts of the posts were me bumping it lol
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Re: Run This Town feat. mcZu

Postby Wreck » Jan 5th, '11, 11:44

Too fuckin ill, both of you. The thesaurus line had me goin :o :o :o x10
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Re: Run This Town feat. mcZu

Postby mcZu » Jan 5th, '11, 20:21

^Thanks, bruh, appreciate it.
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Re: Run This Town feat. mcZu

Postby Xray » Jan 5th, '11, 20:37

Nice verse CoSh. Flowed well. Lyricism here was better than your other work. Zu your verse was fucking nice, specially that thesaurus line everyone mentioned. Dope collab guys. :y:
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Re: Run This Town feat. mcZu

Postby WakeUpShow » Jan 5th, '11, 21:31

Xray wrote:Nice verse CoSh. Flowed well. Lyricism here was better than your other work. Zu your verse was fucking nice, specially that thesaurus line everyone mentioned. Dope collab guys. :y:

appreciate it man
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Re: Run This Town feat. mcZu

Postby gutawafang » Jan 19th, '11, 02:46

Put a thesaurus on your spine to see if you can back up your words :worship:

overall, dope flow to the beat. :y:
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Re: Run This Town feat. mcZu

Postby Spyder » Jan 24th, '11, 19:38

Cosh: not bad man, the rhyming i thought was pretty basic but it flowed nice
and i like the ostracized line. increase your vocab and maybe work on punches a tad and you could be nice
i heard you were dope so i wanted to check out a piece
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Re: Run This Town feat. mcZu

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Jan 25th, '11, 17:16

Put a thesaurus on your spine to see if you can back up your words

OH FUCKING SHIT!! :worship:

did u borrow a crooked rhyme scheme zu?

shit was ILL

@cosh

u need to spice up yo shit a lil more was dope though. :y:
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