Throwaway Verse

[Solace]

LoF: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=103942
I don't remember what I wrote this to.

Chapter one: Well right now, I've been through a lot of shit,
Which rips into my heart and digs right into my confidence,
Crazy see? Not a bit. A lazy teen? Solace is,
I could be the sidekick in which Satan needs, positive,
Hate on me? Call it quits. It's boring to me,
How boring and bleak all your fucking stories can be,
It's corny you see, but fuck I'm breaking down at the core,
The place where all my love, hate and passion is stored,
How will I manage? I'm torn, into this panic I'm sucked in,
Anger turns into nothing more than volcanic eruptions,
Been damaged and roughened, damn I'm sad and enraged,
Trapped in this cage for more than just a matter of days,
I have to refrain from saying things I'll live to regret,
I fumble and mumble a choice that really isn't the best,
With all respect, we're working hard in this world of sin,
We're living life in Hell but mostly enjoy the burn of it.

[DrKilljoy82]

pretty good man

[Solace]

Thank you, I appreciate you checking this.

[Enimee]

damn bro i kinda really liked this, had a couple real solid bars thaat just flowed perfectlly, sounded like u were tellin an actually story...
good shit

[Atone]

dude this is pretty damn sick, it's almost like a writer writing a story, i could picture a narrarator sort of, idk, hard to explain, but this is pretty sweet

[Solace]

damn bro i kinda really liked this, had a couple real solid bars thaat just flowed perfectlly, sounded like u were tellin an actually story...
good shit

Thanks Enimee, glad you liked it

dude this is pretty damn sick, it's almost like a writer writing a story, i could picture a narrarator sort of, idk, hard to explain, but this is pretty sweet

Aha thanks again JnH