A Soldier's Tears
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A Soldier's Tears
by Fa-Q » Dec 4th, '10, 22:05
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Re: A Soldier's Tears
by Audi » Dec 4th, '10, 22:37
The 9th line is the best imo. Pretty good job. 
Reminds me of this piece I wrote
viewtopic.php?f=24&t=103540
Reminds me of this piece I wrote
viewtopic.php?f=24&t=103540
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Re: A Soldier's Tears
by Ka0t1c » Dec 15th, '10, 02:23
i like this piece, no question, one of the best i've read!
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: A Soldier's Tears
by Enimee » Dec 15th, '10, 03:02
good shit, great vocab, outstanding imagery, i could def feel the emotion.
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Re: A Soldier's Tears
by Atone » Dec 15th, '10, 05:39
i like this alot because it has alot to do with the current times, it fits good, love the way you wrote each line, great read man
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