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Wrath (Freeverse)

Postby Solace » Dec 15th, '10, 05:01

LoF: http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic. ... 4&t=103890

Note I haven't wrote with this content in 2-3 months. Shouts to Class for helping me revise this.

Every rhyme, I rip it, with a mind so twisted,
Take the knife from my back to carve in hieroglyphics,
I define prolific, a person twisting words with,
Hammer of hates, listen I'm a wicked wordsmith,
Who spits in cursive with the rogue tongue of snakes,
Forge nightmares from dreams while no one's awake,
I go summon hate, choked and hopeless in this state,
Cold as frozen winter lakes, so go provokin' senseless rage,
My brain is broke in many ways, it's a bother to prove,
So I spit on a baby's face like it's part of the booth,
My heart is into- this rap shit, burn it like a match stick,
And get you haters startled like you heard a rifle blastin',
I murder like assassins, leave you true to your trauma,
Curb-stomp you with cleats, yeah man I do what I wanna,
I do what I gotta with tendencies to sever beats
Cleverly, 'til I am hailed the best emcee to ever breath.
Remember me?


Fixed some grammar errors.
Last edited by Solace on Dec 18th, '10, 20:03, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Wrath (Freeverse)

Postby Atone » Dec 15th, '10, 05:37

Incredible rhyme sheme man, at first it was simple and then you brought in some high class shit, i was like whoa not expected lol, great verse
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Re: Wrath (Freeverse)

Postby Solace » Dec 15th, '10, 13:54

Thanks JnH, appreciate it :happy:
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Re: Wrath (Freeverse)

Postby classthe_king » Dec 16th, '10, 05:10

People sleepin on this, Solace is sick as fuck.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Wrath (Freeverse)

Postby Enimee » Dec 16th, '10, 05:15

shit is hard man def agree with class hot shit man as alwayz
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Re: Wrath (Freeverse)

Postby Solace » Dec 18th, '10, 19:00

Thanks guys :worship:
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