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The Faith Fool

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The Faith Fool

Postby HipHopHead » Dec 17th, '10, 02:19

I think less of the lord for not expressing his force
If you can rap, it don't mean shit, unless you're pressing record
Maybe that's why in church I've never knelt to him for
I lay my hand on the bible leave the testaments scorched
Like an acetylene torch, and leave cinders in my wake
Break bread with your enemies, I'm there, then set a plate
All the Christians think that I'm really filled with hate
And in the Garden Of Eve gettin lifted with the snake
-Flow Change-
I been awake for like three straight days
Laughing at the fact that we say grace
There's no listening but we stay prais-
ing to empty rooms because we obey faith
How can I take you, serious, you prey to
A figment of imagination, you faith fool
How can I make you, hear this, the straight truth
When the bible's are your ear mits, you faith fool
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Re: The Faith Fool

Postby HipHopHead » Dec 18th, '10, 21:13

Why, you believe in the big man in the clouds I assume :coffee:
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Re: The Faith Fool

Postby Solace » Dec 18th, '10, 23:42

I thought it was real dope. I'm on your side with this anyways. Hope this topic don't turn into a stupid argument.
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Re: The Faith Fool

Postby Willy » Dec 19th, '10, 10:41

Good, but could be better. :y:

You just stated your beliefs, but you need to back it up. If you want this faith fool to stop believing then challenge him. Challenge his motives for believing.

You had some pretty good rhymes, so you are already a step ahead of the death metal kids. However, to distinguish yourself from the devil's advocates, give us some reasons they (believers) are wrong. Give us some reasons you are write. Elaborate.
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Re: The Faith Fool

Postby HipHopHead » Dec 19th, '10, 19:59

I have at least 3 drops giving facts backing this up. A full song worth, this is just me taking a different approach. If you're interested I could PM them to you.
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