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Today's Reality - (Unfinished)

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Today's Reality - (Unfinished)

Postby ChristinaE12 » Dec 22nd, '10, 00:18

My newest piece of work. Still unfinished and just a rough draft. I will write another 16-20 explaining the other side of things at some point too..

At line 14 and on, I basically just typed out first things that came to mind. Which definitely needs looked at more once I get more time to actually spend on it.


http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=104273#wrap

We wonder why everyone's popping pills
or kids selling drugs. Is it all for the shocking thrill
Is it calming, chill? Or just to make a quick buck.
Dealing to kids like it's cool now to act as a sick fuck?
Robbing and stealing, stick ups, stuck livin halfway amuck,
Like a time bomb you just tickin away and struck,
True, life sucks when you have nothin but a twisting stomach
From ill luck. The knives your gripping numb it.
Peacefulness from slitting wrists brings, come quickly enough.
So to avoid it becomes tricky, gets tough.
Growing up these days you see stuff you wouldn't before
Guns, violence, jackin drugs and killing spree's, we just see more
You lookin at me for, Your sons vile, since, packin slugs
and willing to squeeze a heater, all cause acting thug
and feeling you seize, is consciously pleasing these
wannabe G's thinking they just harmlessly teasing
when yelling freeze, you at gun point shaking at the knees and
Screaming, thinkin your getting shot even at the slightest of sneezes.
"If Life's a bitch and revenge is sweet... I'm the sweetest bitch you'll ever meet."

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Re: Today's Reality - (Unfinished)

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 22nd, '10, 00:27

Christina with the multis....I'm impressed to say the least, great piece
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Re: Today's Reality - (Unfinished)

Postby ChristinaE12 » Dec 22nd, '10, 21:51

Words Myth wrote:Christina with the multis....I'm impressed to say the least, great piece



Lol. Thanks for the feedback.. :8)
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Re: Today's Reality - (Unfinished)

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 22nd, '10, 22:10

ChristinaE12 wrote:
Words Myth wrote:Christina with the multis....I'm impressed to say the least, great piece



Lol. Thanks for the feedback.. :8)

Is that a Patriots stocking cap in your avatar?
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Re: Today's Reality - (Unfinished)

Postby ChristinaE12 » Dec 22nd, '10, 22:31

Yeah.. And I'm wearing a Brady Jersey too.. Haha.
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