Struggled writing this

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Had a pretty bad block lately and haven't been able to write anything of quality. This was the first thing I sat down and forced myself to write. (usually I've been giving up about 10 minutes in) I think partly due to the fact I'm unispired. I don't have anywhere to record at the moment so I don't feel like writing. Shitty state of things.

Anyhow, I forced this out.. It flows good on the beat but I don't know.



hi my name is dignity you lost me in the sink
in that bathroom, that club that was chartered for the weak
what you did to me was costly I'm offering a drink
(Bottoms up)... I'm awfully amused at your offering
Maybe you can tell me how you're using it to barter with,
(Part of it is sense... part of it is life...)
pardon any mess that you are leaving her tonight..
tonight, sit upon the curb until your morning comes
to earth.. Morning doves signify the ending of the evening,
(evens signify the ending of the odds) --- Panned to side said same time as next line
Lending out the stars to the dawn and it's greetings (greetings)
Dawning a new season of change in the region
And how about we all get along...
Fall into the sun to the warmth to the song,
it's more like a law than a cause & effect
'cuz, cause & effect really wasn't that effective, now was it??

[classthe_king]

I've always wondered what you meant when you put things in parenthesis.

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I've always wondered what you meant when you put things in parenthesis.

They're punch-ins, lol. If you listen to a spoonfull song and listen to his punch ins, it's those types. I put them in parenthesis to remind myself, lol.

[classthe_king]

I've always wondered what you meant when you put things in parenthesis.

They're punch-ins, lol. If you listen to a spoonfull song and listen to his punch ins, it's those types. I put them in parenthesis to remind myself, lol.

Ahhhh, that's what I kind of figured. It was goona be something in the background or something different then the other raps that you insert in.


And this wasn't too bad for being in a writers block. I thought it flowed extremely well. I know what you mean about not having inspiration though haha, good luck getting out of it.

[Mr. Chambers]

link of feedback?

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Ehhh...