White & Blue

[classthe_king]

I was mainly going for flow on this. Didn't focus much on lyricism. I start rapping at :35

This is for the white and blue, for my brothers hard as steel
So when they’re on Harmon field that you know I’m fightin too
I’ll go light with you; I’m spewin flames inside the booth
We go through the same abuse and pain but I’m fightin through
This divine spitter defines sicker when I rhyme quicker
Put your heart in this, but don’t be startin shit cause mines bigger
I’m seventeen and I’ve had this regime on my back
So watch and you’ll see me etch my dream on the pad
And if you’re lucky I’ll let you stand in the glow
Or you can be just another victim stranded below
One hand on my pencil and one hand on my throat
As I carve my darkest fears in this canvas of hope

http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=104582

[WakeUpShow]

the flow was great, really. the last two lines were a perfect climax to the whole verse. good internal rhyming too.

[Ka0t1c]

ditto, i like ur skill

[Slim Zaddy]

Tight shit like always . Not your best but it's sick

[TheRealSlim]

Excellent work... Don't fucking battle me please....

[classthe_king]

I've completely changed this a ton aahahahahaha and I'm adding a lot to it.

I'll post the final product when it's done.

[TheRealSlim]

SweEt Let us know!

[classthe_king]

This is for the white and blue, for my brothers hard as steel
So when they’re on Harmon field that you know I’m fightin too
Ignite ya crew as I’m spewin flames inside the booth
I abuse the game cause I choose to reign with violent brute
This divine spitter climbs quicker cause I rhyme sicker
Your heart’s big but don’t start shit cause mines bigger
I’m wreckin beats till legend’s seen on my plaque
So watch closely and see me etch my dream on the pad
And if you’re lucky I’ll let you stand in the glow
Or you can be just another victim stranded below
One hand on my pencil, one hand on my throat
As I carve my darkest fears in this canvas of hope
Cause nowadays any kid‘ll start rappin at you
But only a passionate few are really graspin the truth
Who can say they have their heart attached to the booth
And vow to spit till they’re out and hit the max of their youth
This is more than just music; it’s the core of a movement
To revolutionize thought and restore all that’s prudent
But life’s a bitch, so I grab the whore and abuse it
You do the same and when you listen ignore the pollution
And how dare you come up to me and talk about Wayne
Every time you speak it seems like I’m crossin out names
You were so caught in trends you forgot about change
And now we wonder adrift, lost without aim
But I got the map in my hand; firm in my clutch
And this has never once been about earnin some bucks
It’s about forging a dream with the birth of a trust
So hopefully sometime soon you are learnin from us