Reflection

[ilovebender.com]

I know what it's like to be fat and to look at mirrors like spying at some horror movie, alas, those times have past. Great story flow telling a story a million a could relate to, was alright.

[mdemaz]

So many things I can relate to in this piece.
If you want constructive criticism, I'd suggest you tone down the self loathing stuff bro!
You'll feel better and optimistic..
Instead of trying to rap about a story; Become the story!

Other then that dope song, fire and killed it etc etc..

Pfft I can talk....My stuff is misanthropy..

[mdemaz]

Bumpa cars...
I meant being the story like really expressing what your thinking at the present time you know...But it's all good..

[WakeUpShow]

I really liked the flow and emotion on this. Rhyming was a little off on a few parts but overall great piece man!