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racism

Postby Edge » Jan 2nd, '11, 08:16

you could try to attack me but like acne il make ya face pop
black heads or white heads, i dont let race stop
me from showing you that when my hate drops
your life is gunna shatter like when a plate flops
so whether your black, hispanic or caucasian
polish, russian, italian, or maybe your-asian
jamacian, haian, maybe puerto rican
i dont give a fuck about the thoughts ya thinking
and if you tell me anyway? i leave you raw and leaking
yea distraught and stinking, i kill rabbis and i torture deacons
i come after muslims, buddhists and catholics
jews, hindus too, im still down to attack shit
cuz me, i dont see in color or race
my knife dont either, itl cut up ya face
i dont care about your culture or ethnicity
i spark shit, i volt ya with electricity
so face this, im trying to eliminate racists
cuz whites aint gettin in, fuck man, i hate this
its crazed shit, im tryin to blaze shit
but theres no open road, guess its time for me to pave it
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: racism

Postby WakeUpShow » Jan 2nd, '11, 16:07

yo i didn't really like the subject matter. But you had good rhyming and pretty good flow. The last line worked really well too.
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Re: racism

Postby Edge » Jan 2nd, '11, 17:46

CoSh wrote:yo i didn't really like the subject matter. But you had good rhyming and pretty good flow. The last line worked really well too.


Thanks man, I was bored and thought of the first line and wanted to expand the punchline and thought if the black head and white head and from there was like fuck it lemme talk about this lol thanks for the feed
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Re: racism

Postby Edge » Jan 6th, '11, 13:34

Thanks for the feed man and I ment you're asian haha
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