Toot It & Boot It Freestyle

[HipHopHead]

Feedback: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=105780&p=1476390#p1476390

Beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=77a31WlGR4c

They say nature is a mother and life is a bitch (so)
Women rule the world and I like it how it is (though)
I won't pay that same respect to the av-er-age (hoe)
If they half witted, and gold diggin from the get (go)
Like half of them are, they want the cash and the car
They want the athletic star, always actin all hard
The guy who doesn't give a damn, with no attention span
Ignorin all their texts and avoiddin all their plans
Yeah, usin them for sex, then telling all his mans
Got them feeling all stressed cause he'll never hold their hand
And never meets your glance when you see him in the hallways
Textin you after school, haven't seen you all day
Winky face probably, smiley maybe so
You return the flirt, but still claim that you ain't a hoe
Never takes it slow, not...because he likes you
Because he's a douche bag, this is fuckin highschool
He's got a right to say he loves you more
And forward that message to forty other girls
Cause sluts make pricks and a prick makes a hoe
And hoes need cash, and pricks have doe
But they don't have goals, they don't have a tomorrow
They'll smoke a couple bowls, trade liquor for sorrow
You're hot though....you're so pretty and perfect
So original, so pure, and best believe you're worth it
To flirt with...and to pass the time talking to
So why chose a guy who's probably never thought of you
When what you ought to do is get what you worth
Get a guy who'd cross the desert just to rid you of thirst
If there's a puddle in the street, he'd probably lay down his shirt
Not a dime a dozen nothin tryna peak up ya skirt
What I speak in a verse, considered personal opinion
I pass it to the guy who says he's done with women
Never getting back what he's puttin out and givin
Just to let him know they don't have easy livin
For every girl you love, there's a guy who's kissed em
And never texted back or said why, he dismissed em
And what you're missin when see that pretty face
Is a heart glued together with cracks in every place
So I had to take a second, for the record, set it straight
Cause boys love girls, and girls love the chase

[MikeNUFC]

I liked it, flow was pretty flawless. The whole thing was structured fantastically as well, especially this bit:

He's got a right to say he loves you more
And forward that message to forty other girls
Cause sluts make pricks and a prick makes a hoe
And hoes need cash, and pricks have doe
But they don't have goals, they don't have a tomorrow
They'll smoke a couple bowls, trade liquor for sorrow

The rhyming was great, but I like how you didn't go over the top with it, which was perfect for the piece. Too easy to attempt to shove loads of rhymes in and ruin the flow and narrative of the piece. Perfect balance.

[HipHopHead]

I liked it, flow was pretty flawless. The whole thing was structured fantastically as well, especially this bit:

He's got a right to say he loves you more
And forward that message to forty other girls
Cause sluts make pricks and a prick makes a hoe
And hoes need cash, and pricks have doe
But they don't have goals, they don't have a tomorrow
They'll smoke a couple bowls, trade liquor for sorrow

The rhyming was great, but I like how you didn't go over the top with it, which was perfect for the piece. Too easy to attempt to shove loads of rhymes in and ruin the flow and narrative of the piece. Perfect balance.

I appreciate the love Did you try to flow it to the beat? I just attempted to record it and it flows perfect but my delivery takes away from my breath control too much for this one. I'm gonna have to spend some more time and delete a few words if I'm going to put this on audio.

[WakeUpShow]

flow was absolutely amazing. I loved the content, and also the part Mike said and the last line. Great Rhyming, keep it up!

[HipHopHead]

Thanks bro

[Enimee]

not the best lyrically, and i dont know why u chose this beat for this subject but lol, dope message though defnitly feelin a couple of the lines like the cross the desert line, great concept and u executed u well, real dope verse man im diggin it

[HipHopHead]

not the best lyrically, and i dont know why u chose this beat for this subject but lol, dope message though defnitly feelin a couple of the lines like the cross the desert line, great concept and u executed u well, real dope verse man im diggin it

Toot It and Boot It means to hit it and quit it...the whole song is about relationships and people who do that...plus it's a good beat. Thanks for the feed.

[autotooner]

very good shit, like the whole concept of it.