classthe_king wrote:Ummmmm it was pretty good, nothing great though. You need more imagery in a story telling piece, something I also suffer with. Look up the Sniper and look up the feed K Block gave me, that should help. I don't really understand the ending also.
+I don't really know how to explain the ending. It's like his troubles followed him home, and basically hit home, burned down his house. it goes deeper but I can't explain. Also the Welcome Home Mat/ Matt was basically supposed to be like sarcastic, like see what you did?
