My unyielding hate for LTWYL

[Master Chief]

^ I already proved you wrong on that. Why do you insist?

[BILI]

And try to write a verse with multis that match the one I gave.

WTF son?Thats a CM type of verse,you get it now?Those multies are nothing to brag about,that drop has no meaning at all,I can put 6 syllables wit no meaning whenever you want,drop something with message,or at least wit some real lines that have dope punchlines and multies.

They have no intrinsic meaning, but no CM artist drops 6+ syllable multis are you kidding me?
This verse is a throwaway for me because it's too close to Em's freeverse style. I have many verses with meaning, this isn't for that purpose. Em's swag juice freestyle is no better than this, it's the same bullshit rhyming to rhyme.

If you can do it, go. Write something that matches my verse.[/quote]
5 min verse that shits all over your verse

Steve, a lil boy, only ten years old
Mother died, then tears fall
Can he survive on his own? In his zone
Steve thinks he`s alone, sadly he is alone
Wondering will bad streets eat him up
Wondering will mad Pete beat him up
Couldnt pay the money back, so he got into drugs
Was fucked up, only knew how to do shrugs
It was Christmas, Steve was jealous of all the happy families
He wasnt able to stop thinkin about those crappy fantasies
"Mommy and daddy are back", thats all Steve needs
Sadly he can only watch how Christmas Eve leaves
But only bad people were around him, they only mocked him
Then Peter found him, that phony knocked him
Was crawling back home to get his mothers old warmer
But then Steve died all alone on a cold corner

And it actually has something wit meaning.Your verse is something Nicki would write.

@Master...he`s stupid and lil slow,thats why.At the end of the day he thinks Fack>LTWYL

[mdemaz]

[FreeSpeech]

Anyone with +1 year of writing rap lyrics can write lines like that.

Not from what I've seen from you all on here. Write something dope, go!

When did I post any of my raps in the CW section?

Here I go: (in 3 minutes).

Listen dawg, I'm dope as hell,
This is all, I've wrote to tell,
Kicking these sick wicked rhymes,
Gitting three chicks, thick and fine,
I am the evil teacher of mythical creatures,
I ridicule preachers cause I'm the biblical Jesus,
Rap, you blow at it while on mics I'm so savage,
I leave bones shattered like coke addicts, gone batshit,
I'm a cold basterd where's my soul's caskit?
I'm not done if I make a CD and the masses don't have it,

^ I can do that too roflcopter lololololo. No substance at all. It sucks balls because it's rhyming for the hell of it. If Eminem wanted to write like you and me he would make us look like fools.

You don't maintain the rhyme schemes for merely as long.
You're confusing 2 identical 3 syllable rhymes in the same bar with 6 syllable rhymes, big difference. You're first 4 lines are the only ones that qualify.

My lines aren't anything amazing, bu they are far better. Anyone with an analytical eye can see that. I don't expect you to agree, but whatever.

[mdemaz]

I still say drink a box of wine.

[xxTrigger1989xx]

If you're unyielding, why post about it in the first place? I mean, clearly you wanna debate it, but what's the point if you're not gonna listen to what others are saying anyway?

[Unscarred]

You're from Bulgaria. I'll never read your opinion again as Bulgarians know nothing of hiphop.

Is that the best you can come up with, same old same old. People doesn't have anything good to come up against me so they say something wise about my country. I see you understand a lot from hip hop, FACK better then LTWYL , seriously you're a total retard. And i see im not the only one who thinks this way, your opinion is not valuable to anyone anymore, face it.

[classthe_king]

I would rap circles around Eminem, it's not hard.

[mdemaz]

I had a holiday at Bulgaria..Nice place actually..

[Master Chief]

Mine is a terrible as yours and so is your argument for everything brought up in this thread

[classthe_king]

Also, don't try and argue with Amadeo, he will rape you in the ass.

[mdemaz]

Also, don't try and argue with Amadeo, he will rape you in the ass.

He would be a good candidate for Text Champions.

[Unscarred]

I had a holiday at Bulgaria..Nice place actually..

Thats cool, where exactly?

[Master Chief]

I would rap circles around Eminem, it's not hard.

It's too bad your delivery/voice is god-awful and your flow/breath control is disgusting. I rap better than you and I don't even wanna be a rapper

[classthe_king]

I would rap circles around Eminem, it's not hard.

It's too bad your delivery/voice is god-awful and your flow/breath control is disgusting. I rap better than you and I don't even wanna be a rapper

You're dumb as fuck dude, have you heard any of my songs recorded in the past week where I fixed that? That's what I thought.